To Fight the Coming Darkness
By JBern
Wow, I like angry Harry :)
Thanks.
Jesus christ that was great. Angry Harry really agrees with me. I was also laughing quite hard at the thought of Harry and Voldemort sitting down and having a chat.
Best chapter so far, I'd say. Though Hagrid's death comes damn close.
Glad you liked the resolution of Peter's life debt.~Jim
haaaaaaahhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahaha what a great ending u rule
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.~Jim
Harry's plan worked brilliantly. Love the casual way you dispatched Lucius. The Weasley-Abbot blood feud would, I think, be won by the Weasleys by sheer strength of numbers if nothing else. Plus Hysterical Hannah wouldn't have been much good. Oh dear, I suspect the Abbots have just started more than one blood feud. Idiots, no wonder Hufflepuff has such a reputation for being inferior!
Sometimes deaths like Lucius' need to be sudden and over in an instant. It adds to the atmosphere of the story.~Jim
This chapter only went minutes but it was amazingly action packed. You could have left it Harry blown out of the window, but it was still a cliffhanger.
Simply wonderful writing!
It was tempting to end the chapter with Harry being blown out of the window, but I didn't want to do another evil cliffhanger after the previous chapter's end. Thanks again for the compliments.~Jim
'crushing it like a bull in a proverbial china shop', a suggestion, when you come to a scene like this try not use a the same cliche you did several chapters earlier in a similar scene. I know
many people remember cliches like this.
Try something more like... smashing through her tripwires and core shield like a semi through a compact. Something more original.
Either way I sense a duel....
Good point. Sometimes I have to remember when I have used a metaphor like that to prevent reuse. I will keep it in mind. Hope you like the duel when you see it.~Jim
Uh oh, Is this he birth of Dark Lord Potter?
One of the themes of this story was about losing oneself to the Darkness - the inner war.