To Fight the Coming Darkness
By JBern
Name: Rebel Goddess
Chapter: Why Lucius Will Never Eat Corn Again
Posted On: Wednesday 18th April 2007 6:56am
Jeez, poor Luna! I almost want to say "poor Marcus!" but can't bring myself to it. Superb chapter. You're so good at these action scenes.
Reply from: JBern
Thanks!~Jim
Name: DaZZa
Chapter: Why Lucius Will Never Eat Corn Again
Posted On: Tuesday 14th November 2006 3:30pm
Minor nitpick
"He was worried about the tow of them, but it wasn’t the only thing on his mind."
I think it should be "worried about the two of them".
I'm liking this story more and more as it goes on. Keep up the great work.
Reply from: JBern
Fixed. Glad you are enjoying the story!~Jim
Name: Aaran St Vines
Chapter: Why Lucius Will Never Eat Corn Again
Posted On: Tuesday 14th November 2006 3:11pm
Now Susan can know she's not weak - she can't be dead.
Great Snape sacking.
Reply from: JBern
Snape getting sacked was a definite highlight of this chapter. Hope you like the changing dynamic between Hary and Dumbledore. They are working more or less as equals now.~Jim
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First his parents, and now his would-be girlfriend brutally raped into near-insanity? Neville's going to go fucking NUTS.
Nice to see you spotted this ahead of time. You also forgot that the rest of his family was killed off i chapter 5 and 6.~Jim