Turn Me Loose: A Harry Potter Adventure
I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)
New baby?! What can I say but congratulations. I have a pipe dream of the same, but some genetics weren't meant to proliferate, they were meant to terraform.
Hey whatever happened to Hedwig?
Really enjoying the story.
Interesting choice of Harry's 'bed warmers'. First some unnamed witch Fleur sets up then the guide they stumbled upon to find their destination. This is an improvement for sure, less angsty, more fun. Good fight too. How come 6 blasters wear Harry out but he can do two of those lightning curses? Kind of contradicting your own information. Good chapter, allthough I think they should've stopped to wipe out the camp of warders/goblins/etc.
Brilliant chapter. Good to see we're back to the cut and thrust of the action. Indeed I think you're story is "strking hard, striking fast and leaving chaos in its wake!".
Glad I have more to read. Thanks for writing.
Woohoo! Magical Blitzkrieg! So is Harry Rudolph?
Lots of action, sex with the hot alien girl, and a cobbled together, super-fast mode of travel; sounds like an episode of classic 'Trek!
I love it!
Editorial notes: (and I thought this part was over with)
"...the fervor he throws himself into it ..."
- ...fervor *with which* he throws himself into it...
- OR -
...the fervor he throws into it ...
"...If they didn't take us seriously before, I know they are now."
- If they weren't taking us seriously before, I know they are now."
- OR -
- If they didn't take us seriously before, I know they do now."
"Tell me what you know about the Horseman themselves."
"...a bad place to lose sight of why we're and what we're up against."
- lose sight of why we're *here* and what we're up against.
Excellent story. Lots of action, good humor. Besides a troll familiar has to be the coolest thing ever.
I have enjoyed these stories more than I thought they would...
Either way, I think Svetlanna is Baba Yaga in disguise... I don't even want to imagine what Bill would say about older women then...
I also suppose congratulations are in order for the man with a new baby.
Great. I really can't wait for continuation. I have some ideas of what may be in store later and am exited to see if I'm right. Keep up the great writing.
The sexual connotations of Moody's speech were very funny. It's good to see that Harry is still female-obsessed in a normal teenage way especially with Svetlanna and her dryadish blood. LOL at Professor Binns and the Goblin Wars being the most important class in the Hogwarts' curriculum.
The change in Harry's position is well underlined. I imagine he does miss those days in some ways, but probably not if he remembers how scared he was most of the time and Kwan's lessons. Harry's rationalisation of his activity with Svetlanna was hilarious. I also really liked that her return was "anti-climactic". As always, an exciting and well written chapter. I can't wait for more though I have my suspicions about Sventlanna's true nature. Great stuff.
LOVE IT! I still can't get over how much I like this style of writing. The unique way you do first person makes everything seem that much more epic.
Great chapter. Good to see Harry get some satisfying sex; Hack can't have all the fun. Good action scenes. Thanks for writing. W.
Good chapter, held my interest until the end. Moar? :)
Brilliant - as always!
The Hack scenes are always a joy, and Moody just adds to that. Poor Harry; stuck with him and Kwan!
I'm wondering if Svetlana is actually Baba Yaga, and if those runes she's doodling on Harry are significant.
I'm also wondering if I'm getting paranoid.
Great chapter. The fights, as always were excellent.
So, did Baba Yaga kill her own grandmother?
I just discovered that this site has been down for a while and Jeconais "authorised (sic) the deletion of over unsent (sic) 30,000 emails".
So, don't be surprised if the reviews were a little sparser, many people didn't get an update alert. I'm delighted to see that this story has been updated.
And the fun continues. Thanks for the update, and congrats on the success of both your fanfiction and your original stuff!!!
Heh awesome chapter. How I love my man-whore days.. oh wait I never had any.. why oh why did I marry young? The visual from your scene with Hak falling from the sky onto the other Giant made me laugh. The sled idea is pretty cool as well. Can't wait till the next chapter. Thanks for writing!
Good luck with the new baby they are alot of work (I have 2 toddlers at home at the moment thats loads of fun as well.)
Awesome read!! Really like these characters, as they all seem mortal (ie capable of blundering).
This is the first time I've read either Bungle in the Jungle or Turn Me Loose. I have to say that reading in 2nd person is exceedingly strange, but you've written it very well. I'm enjoying the story a lot.
Snow sledding with a tail wind sounds like fun, actually. I can't help wondering how a jaguar likes snow, though. This story is full of nifty ideas and wonderful turns of phrase.