Keats449 posted a comment on Monday 25th January 2010 8:14pm for Eating Their Nuts

I like how you have runes and wards work, and the different things they do.

flynhghr posted a comment on Thursday 19th November 2009 5:15pm for Eating Their Nuts

Good chapter, and lots of action! I was disappointed he didn't get to try his new tricks on Amy though, oh well, maybe next chapter.

fyrecat posted a comment on Wednesday 24th December 2008 5:24pm for Eating Their Nuts

interesting and funny. well done as usual. But don't go insulting Monty Python!

Editorial notes:

"...as you continue to sketching and tracing..." - loose the 'to'.

"...the last two methods work surprising well against most opponents." - Surprisingly

"From their, the two of you..."
- there. 'their' = belonging to them.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 9th January 2008 7:50am for Eating Their Nuts

Very good action. Good story.

gunny

JBern replied:

Thanks.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 7th March 2007 8:50am for Eating Their Nuts

Granger animating THE BOOK to sleep with it was disturbing, very, very disturbing, as it's probably only too accurate. I also loved the beginnings of animagery and the way Harry learned how to apparate. Harry and the dragon was such a terrifically fun scene. Great line: "I know blackmail is so very beneath me, but it is a flaw I am learning to live with."

JBern replied:

Thanks for all the reviews.   When I have more free time, I'll respond to each, but I just wanted to jump in and say thanks.   Harry is a bit down on his friends at that point.   You'll probably notice that as the story goes on, he becomes less fixiated with Ron and Hermy F. Bags.   Still, he is a bitter teenager...

And what pray do tell is wrong with Kwan's instructional methods? I think you'll really enjoy the coming chapters and the animagery that ensues.

Jim

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Saturday 6th January 2007 11:11am for Eating Their Nuts

Still enjoying your story.

Last paragraph, third sentence, you used the wrong "their" it should have been "there"

Thanks for writing.

Mike (MoA)

JBern replied:

Thanks.   Added to the list.   I seem to do that one all the time.~Jim

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 1:13am for Eating Their Nuts

This is an amazingly clever and creative story. I cannot imagine why I never started on it before.

The genius of your master construct of runes and wards is such an admirable piece of writing.

Great Fun!

JBern replied:

That was the beauty of it!     Most stories just   have Dumbles, Bill or Hermione setting all these wards.   I started to wonder how do wards work.   Hopefully, this will inspire many Cursebreaking Harry stories to come.~Jim

Niamh posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 12:46pm for Eating Their Nuts

love it!!!

JBern replied:

Thanks.   I am going to start on chapter 14 tomorrow and it should be ready by the weekend. ~Jim