Bedrup posted a comment on Tuesday 16th June 2009 4:52am for The Trapped Boy

A rooster on steroids. Quilling killing of the diary. Now that is really something. Delighted.

K posted a comment on Monday 15th June 2009 4:58pm for The Trapped Boy

For some reason, I picture a giant chocobo instead of a rooster or chicken. And I can totally see Harry riding one.
Very good as usual, can't wait for the next years!
K

warpwizard posted a comment on Monday 15th June 2009 10:44am for The Trapped Boy

Heh, pretty good. Giant chicken = +10 to base humor value. Great name too.

lewen posted a comment on Monday 15th June 2009 8:14am for The Trapped Boy

this is so bizzarely fun.

Dracolych69 posted a comment on Monday 15th June 2009 4:19am for The Trapped Boy

Very nice. Can't wait for the next one. Does Dobby get freed like in the books, or will we find out about it next chapter? Seeing as how Harry was able to avoid all of his methods to remove Harry from the school, those two together would be quite effective. Like the last little bit with Ginny. Maybe she should stick to normal boys, indeed!

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Sunday 14th June 2009 10:07pm for The Trapped Boy

Hehe, I think this was the original idea you sent to RG and I last year. I love the Colonel Sanders gag. Giant cockerels rule me thinks!

I really chuckled over the use of a blood quill and what he wrote to kill Riddle. Very clever.

Thanks for writing.
Monkey

Darryn posted a comment on Sunday 14th June 2009 9:14pm for The Trapped Boy

Oh that's classic, Riding on a giant rooster?
This still remains one of the funniest things I read.

Kortir posted a comment on Sunday 14th June 2009 1:37pm for The Trapped Boy

Hehehe, this is awfully amusing. I have to wonder if you're having too much fun with it! Yay for Seer!Harry. Crazy is awesome.

joeBob posted a comment on Sunday 14th June 2009 10:04am for The Trapped Boy

Most amusing. Thanks for sharing.

bluezy posted a comment on Sunday 14th June 2009 7:26am for The Trapped Boy

I love how you make it so delightfully crazy. Great, keep up the good work.

Dethryl posted a comment on Sunday 14th June 2009 6:41am for The Trapped Boy

Harry is the ultimate straight man. By Merlin's rusty windpipes, that's funny.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Sunday 14th June 2009 3:07am for The Trapped Boy

Behold the unfried power of KFC; a giant basilisk is no match for a rooster on growth potion, and Harry's blood undoes the diary. He saves Ginny, and even manages to undo her crush despite it (thanks to the rooster).

Jderig posted a comment on Saturday 13th June 2009 6:57am for The Trapped Boy

Good lord, I think this chapter might even be better than the first! Well done jbern, well done.

whatareyouevensaying posted a comment on Saturday 13th June 2009 5:37am for The Trapped Boy

I don't have words. Really. Outstandingly hilarious work.

I'm pretty sure that the Astronomy professor's name is spelled "Sinestra", but I've been wrong before.

Looking forward to more.

Carol Layland posted a comment on Saturday 13th June 2009 2:46am for The Trapped Boy

Truly a most unusual story that is curious to read as it is so very different from canon. At first I had trouble centering the story but as I read it became very clear where you were going. I am enjoying this story very much. Thank you for writing it. Carol Layland

dic posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 9:53pm for The Trapped Boy

liked it. thx.

and I liked dead eye too, bought it on smashwords. thank you, and keep it up!

Jimmy posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 7:08pm for The Trapped Boy

lmao! GIANT CHICKEN?? LMAO!

M. R. Moore posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 4:01pm for The Trapped Boy

I love your Colonel, it reminds me of that old Scooby Doo episode, The Frickert Fracas, where Scooby and Shaggy get chased around by a giant rooster that ate some secret growth accelerator... stuff...

AgentScorpion posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 3:35pm for The Trapped Boy

If I was as a good writer as you, I'd be able to tell you how awesome this was, but as I'm not, you'll just have to settle in the knowledge that you have written the first two chapters to a very funny fic.

kb0 posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 2:26pm for The Trapped Boy

That was really funny! I'm not sure what was best... Ginny finding out that the boy she had a crush on wasn't what she expected. Harry destroying the book by writing in it with a blood quill. A giant chicken named Colonel Sanders. Or that Lockhart made a move on another teacher (and forced at that). All 4 were good things. Of course, you having him get along with Luna so well makes a lot of sense. :) I look forward to the other chapters.

Kevin