The Inner Eye of Harry Potter
The Trapped Boy
By JBern
Reviews
morriganscrow posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 2:05pm for The Trapped Boy
I have to say this is the most...um...unique version of Harry I've come across in quite some time.
Excellent, albeit brain-spinning, chapter.
Minerva Granger posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 1:22pm for The Trapped Boy
I'm enjoying this fic more and more with every new chapter. Great inclusion of the Chinese Calendar, very funny about the Rotfangs, and I'm really glad that Harry and Luna are friends. Kefep up the good work!
Wolf550e posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 1:16pm for The Trapped Boy
"but she and her the other female Gryffindor second year" - editing mishap
"I thought the ‘'Trapped Boy’ was the Colin Creevy" - remove "the"
Ginny riding Harry's giant cock is amazing!
When will Dead eye be available on amazon.co.uk?
dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 1:15pm for The Trapped Boy
For some reason I am stuck with the vision of Harry's Giant Rooster teaching DADA until the end of the year when Hermione gets fed us and tells everyone that Professor Boo is just a giant chicken.
Michael posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 12:56pm for The Trapped Boy
I think I broke something giggling.
Is Col. Sanders going to be kept by Hagrid (why am I asking this? its funny to think of for something to study in Care of magical creatures.)
Keep up the great work
shawn151 posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 12:41pm for The Trapped Boy
BWAHAHAHAHAHA! This is epic. The funniest thing I've read in years. I must admit this is just the most absolutely original canon take I have ever read. This is also my all time Favorite story ever. Seriously his meeting with young Tom is simply overkill on the hilarious meter.
Jeremy DuCharme posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 12:22pm for The Trapped Boy
Colonel Sanders *snicker*
"He's a chicken I tell you! He's a giant chicken!"
Joe Fenton posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 12:02pm for The Trapped Boy
I thought it was pretty clear who "The Trapped Boy" was, but that's the advantage of being a read who knows all about Harry Potter to begin with. :) Another excellent chapter. This is one of the most likable Harry's I've come across. Like Luna - a little odd, but very friendly. I love how subtle, but powerful, divination is in this story.
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 11:19am for The Trapped Boy
Very amusing chapter. Excellent alternate uses for canon artifacts and events.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Chaos_Mancer posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 11:10am for The Trapped Boy
nicely done
Lyman Louie posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 9:54am for The Trapped Boy
Another great chapter. Very original in your way of destroying Tom Riddle and the Basilisk. Can't wait to see the rest of the years. You also perfectly set yourself up the next year. You also could've used the Year of the Dog as well, but Year of the Rat seems more appropriate.
blue artemis posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 9:12am for The Trapped Boy
This is really cute. I can't wait for the other years.
grovepjp posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 8:12am for The Trapped Boy
hehe
QOShea posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 8:08am for The Trapped Boy
So that is where Chicken Boo came from! Very amusing story! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Lathena posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 7:17am for The Trapped Boy
I like the giant chicken.
romero posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 6:39am for The Trapped Boy
Oh boy! Thanks for a very entertaining read.
Clell65619 posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 6:36am for The Trapped Boy
- Oh my god.
- You need to put a warning not to be drinking while reading this story. It almost cost me a monitor when Dumbledore reported Gilderoy's 'accident'
- Dobby taking the bludger was sheer poetry, and Tom trying to deal with this Harry was just... just too funny.
Thank you.
MOD posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 6:34am for The Trapped Boy
Brilliant as always! :D
Neil Glover posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 6:10am for The Trapped Boy
Brilliant story, very funny. I loved the bit with the chicken.
fountaam posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 2:07pm for The Trapped Boy