OriksGaming posted a comment on Friday 26th June 2015 11:01pm for A House of Cards

Very hesitant about reading the story, but it's already making me laugh a little bit and now I'm really interested.

thetaxzombie posted a comment on Tuesday 4th September 2012 3:18pm for A House of Cards

Quite enjoyed this chapter. The things and comments that Harry did or made that were 'off' up till the final portion of the chapter were well done.

The slight unease that was building worked well.

His suddenly becoming a hot-rod chaser was also an excellent touch.

Then wrapping it up with Harry knowing the answer to a question about Ancient Runes and his realization of what had just happened was an excellent finish.

A solid first chapter to draw in your readers. Well done.

dimriver posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd June 2011 1:47am for A House of Cards

I like your additions to quidditch, a shooter's and passer's arc. The way Harry knows something is up, is just amusing.

dimriver posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd June 2011 1:47am for A House of Cards

I like your additions to quidditch, a shooter's and passer's arc. Not to mention the way he knows something is up is just amusing.

santiln posted a comment on Tuesday 12th April 2011 10:40pm for A House of Cards

It's been I while since I finished reading this ff and now it feels like a good moment to start reading it again. This is a great story, worth reading twice or more.
I can't wait for the sequel of this ff.
Greetings

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Sunday 6th December 2009 2:40pm for A House of Cards

Good chapter.

gunny

jerry3 posted a comment on Saturday 24th January 2009 9:36am for A House of Cards

truthfully i thought To Fight the Coming Darkness was your only good story this story proved me wrong so now im going to read bungle in the jungle well done sorting hat was hilarious

JBern replied:

Thanks.   I hope you enjoy Bungle as well.   Darkness was my "rookie" effort.   I like it, but I look back and see so many ways I could have done it differently.~Jim

fyrecat posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2008 12:23pm for A House of Cards

Hmmm... I like it so far. Interesting plot twists both big and small, fun character interaction, great personal observations. *And* I've got nothing editorial to complain about, which makes this just about perfect!
Can't wait to read the rest - So I'll be doing that, for a while at least, tonight!

JBern replied:

There are some errors there.   Fortunately, you overlooked it.~Jim

fyrecat posted a comment on Tuesday 4th November 2008 5:48pm for A House of Cards

Cool! Me likey so far.

JBern replied:

Glad you are enjoying it.~Jim

DarkHeart posted a comment on Tuesday 8th July 2008 6:44pm for A House of Cards

*claps* usually memory fics die from too sudden a burst of memories. you are working subtlely though. n-ice

JBern replied:

Yeah, I prize realism.   The easier it is for the reader to suspend their disbelief the better the story will be for it.   Glad you appreciated that.

MalteseFalcon posted a comment on Friday 25th April 2008 12:54pm for A House of Cards

I'm confused...but intrigued. This looks like it could turn out to be a pretty interesting story, especially considering the quality of your previous work.

JBern replied:

Thanks for the trio of reviews.   I hope the story continues to impress you.   Chapter 13 is now posted.~Jim

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Monday 10th March 2008 10:47am for A House of Cards

No kidding. You are definitely in trouble if you know things you shouldn't.

JBern replied:

Yeah, he thought so too.   I had a little fun in chapter 2 with him thinking that he's a seer.~Jim

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Saturday 1st December 2007 10:05am for A House of Cards

Very good start.

gunny

JBern replied:

Thanks again.~Jim

biged78 posted a comment on Friday 30th November 2007 4:55am for A House of Cards

I just want to say that I DID NOT look at the reviews before posting my previous one.

JBern replied:

No problem.   I'm surprised so many people read these reviews and replies.~Jim

biged78 posted a comment on Friday 30th November 2007 4:54am for A House of Cards

Interesting premise.

JBern replied:

Thanks~Jim

Brian Donnely posted a comment on Sunday 11th November 2007 12:08pm for A House of Cards

Interesting premise.

JBern replied:

Thanks.   Hopefully, the storyline will draw you in.~Jim

Amamama posted a comment on Thursday 14th June 2007 8:15am for A House of Cards

Oh, interesting! This is quite a neat twist, I must say. I had to stop read your other story, as it completely disrupted my sleep (too well written, the horror crept under my skin and stayed there). However, my sweet hubby recommended this to me, and he was quite right. Not nightmare stuff. Good pace, but a few sentences feel a bit abrupt. THat might of course be due the influence from James...

Cheers!

JBern replied:

Well maybe you can pick up Darkness again when it's completed.   It is rather dark and gritty.   I've got about 5 chapters left of that one.   Look for chapter 6 of this one shortly.~Jim

riegert8 posted a comment on Saturday 24th March 2007 11:42am for A House of Cards

This is a good chapter, I hate to admit that I was going to skip it.I thought it was odd that James and Harry merge into one person and it take so long for it to come out. But I thought I give a shot because I like your other two story's, I may disagree some part in it but they were pretty good. I like how that Harry dealing with everything that happen, Sirius escape, Peter goes back to Voldemort and Lupin have to resign. Harry and Lupin has a good talk, I do admit that I am surprise that Lupin is going to take some time before seeking Sirius out.Oliver is getting ready for his tryout with Puddlemere, I knew that he would do that for the fact that he want to prove that he has the skill to play pro. It really funny that Oliver and Katie thought that Harry was holding back that he has skills as a chaser, but then Harry was a seeker and never was aked to play as chaser. It nice that Harry get a chance to workout with Oliver, it might be a big help to Harry and Oliver. Harry is becoming a better flirt, It nice that starting to help other students. I have to admit this a better story then I thought it be.

JBern replied:

I'm glad you like the story.   As for Remus' plans, he's not going to deliberately say anything to Harry about his plans to meet up with Sirius.   Glad you like the part with Oliver and Katie.~Jim

Asad posted a comment on Thursday 22nd March 2007 11:00pm for A House of Cards

It's Ragnok, not Ragnarok.

Nice chappie.

JBern replied:

Actually, it's Ragnarok - the Norse End of Days from mythology.   That's what HJ was refering to when he said that Ron was so oblivious to everything.   Glad you enjoyed the chapter.~Jim

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 7th March 2007 1:38am for A House of Cards

I really liked that beginning. Poor Harry is about to have one hell of a headache I suspect. Great start.

JBern replied:

Thanks again for all the reviews.~Jim