The Lie I've Lived
A House of Cards
By JBern
Reviews
JR Marcellus posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 5:14pm for A House of Cards
Looks promising. Keep it up!
JBern replied:
Thanks. The next chapter is due out in 5 days. I hope you continue to enjoy.~Jim
Shawn Cullipher posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 4:41pm for A House of Cards
Ooooh, I like it. I don't think I've ever read another story combing James and Harry like this. This one definitely has potential, looking forward to seeing how this unfolds.
JBern replied:
Thanks. The next chapter is due out in 5 days. I hope you continue to enjoy.~Jim
M. R. Moore posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 4:26pm for A House of Cards
I think you've got hold of a good idea, I'd just say to remember not to give too much away at once. Though I don't believe you'll do that.
JBern replied:
Some answers are coming next chapter, where our hero mistakenly believes he is a seer.~Jim
Sterling posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 4:13pm for A House of Cards
Okay, Harry is channeling his father....very interesting. You always come up with some great ideas and you present them well and entertainingly, I can't wait for an update on this one. Though at the moment I'm looking forward to seeing how you wrap up Bungle in The Jungle :-)
JBern replied:
Bungle finishes in 5-7 chapters. Darkness in 8-10. This one will carry through until August. The sequel to Bungle will probably start then.~Jim
carlinonthebrain posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 3:36pm for A House of Cards
i like this alot. I've never read a merge story with this as its merge point. its ounds very interesting and i hope to read more of it. cheers
JBern replied:
Thanks. The next chapter is due out in 5 days. I hope you continue to enjoy.~Jim
Nyeshet posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 3:29pm for A House of Cards
Hmm, so Harry is actually James partially re-incarnated - the latter's 'essence' or memories of former life or whatever only awoken after being faced with a hundred or so dementors at once? (Yes, I can see how a hundred dementors could do that - considering that just one is enough for Harry to recall memories from his infancy).
It will be interesting to see where it goes from here - a Harry with James' (upon death) memories . . . .
JBern replied:
More will be revealed as time goes on. Next chapter in 5 days.~Jim
saint posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 2:49pm for A House of Cards
Great one. I particularly like the sarcasm. I hope the chapters will be longer (nothing too much - 10-15k a chapter), multi chapters posted at the same time (once or twice a week), etc, etc. Joking aside a great start.
Beers
Saint
JBern replied:
Nice joke! Sorry. I intend to keep the chapters in the 4-6K range posting weekly.~Jim
keebler_elmo posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 2:40pm for A House of Cards
amazing. The story was nothing amazing until that last segment, where it was fantastic. I can see you really taking this in a great direction. Keep up the good work and update soon.
JBern replied:
Thanks. It's good to see that part of the story was able to grab your interest. I hope to continue to pique your interest.~Jim
Winterknight posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 2:07pm for A House of Cards
this is nice, with an easy flow, making for a smooth. easy read. I like how Harry's distraction with the headache allows the experience and comfortable confidence of, i assume from the summary, his father, to put itself forward without him really noticing. This is a promising beginning.
JBern replied:
Thanks for the review. I hope to keep exceeding your expectations.~Jim
Ltank687 posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 2:05pm for A House of Cards
sweet
JBern replied:
Thanks. Next chapter in 1 week.~Jim
agent fisher posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 1:25pm for A House of Cards
Hmmm, quite interesting. I look forward to the next chapter.
JBern replied:
Thanks. Next chapter in 1 week. See you then.~Jim
Roberta Johnson posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 12:52pm for A House of Cards
Well, now this is looking yummy! Keep it coming! And, thanks!
JBern replied:
Thanks. Next chapter in 1 week.~Jim
Terry Swain posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 12:47pm for A House of Cards
This has the promise of a great story. looking forward to more.
JBern replied:
Thanks for the review. Next chapter in 1 week.~Jim
asvaldson posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 12:41pm for A House of Cards
OMG!!! I love it! More please! *whine*
JBern replied:
Thanks for the review. Don't whine, I'll post another chapter next week.~Jim
Gibby posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 12:22pm for A House of Cards
Well, so far it's great. I hope you can keep up with 3 stories at a time because I'm a big fan of your other stories. Anyway keep up the good writing and I hope to see more of this story.
-Gibby
JBern replied:
3 stories told from 3 different perspectives no less. I will do my best.~Jim
Greg Johnson posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 11:52am for A House of Cards
This is a very interesting start. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Keep up the good work.
JBern replied:
Thanks. Look for the next chapter in 1 week.~Jim
Heir of Gryffindor posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 11:38am for A House of Cards
Wow, this a great story. It also has a very unique plot line. How often do you plan to update it?
JBern replied:
Weekly for as long as I can keep up the pace.~Jim
Arye posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 11:33am for A House of Cards
holy c%#& that was awesome! love the idea, love the story! please update soon!
JBern replied:
Thanks. Next chapter in 1 week. Hope to keep exceeding your expectations.~Jim
freakyfinger posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 11:28am for A House of Cards
Well, this is certainly an interesting start. I really want to see how this turns out.
Is James now living inside of Harry? Or is just part of James with Harry and is now emerging?
I really, really, want to see whether Harry is going to keep this a secret or start asking for help; whether he will continue to be a seeker, or go chaser; and how you will make this a H/F story . . .
JBern replied:
Next chapter in a week. It should clarify your questions, well at least a few of them. For the rest - stay tuned.~Jim
Ivan Cantaros posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 5:34pm for A House of Cards
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