The Lie I've Lived
The Dykstra Shuffle
By JBern
Reviews
Ivan Cantaros posted a comment on Friday 12th December 2008 1:38am for The Dykstra Shuffle
That's great chapter.. I like your idea regarding wizards medical practice, kinda brutal actually about the pig skin and switching body parts.. how come they didn't use that for combat?
Anyway thanks for the update! will wait for more..
JBern replied:
Well, people don't generally stand still during combat and let things get switched. It also takes a truly skilled wizard or witch to utilize Transfiguration in combat like that. However, Dumbledore, McGonagall, and HJ are those kind of people.
MonCappy posted a comment on Friday 12th December 2008 1:29am for The Dykstra Shuffle
This chapter has one of the most imaginative solutions to a dragon related Tri-Wizard task. I applaud your efforts with that section. Poor Aimee, though. I was hoping that Krum would be the one to receive a roasting.
Oh well. At least he is a competent adversary.
JBern replied:
It's too early for Krum to get some just desserts.~Jim
DrT posted a comment on Friday 12th December 2008 1:16am for The Dykstra Shuffle
Neville is getting an education hanging around HJ and Hat, that's for certain! too bad he wasn't there for the confrontation with the politician as well
JBern replied:
Glad you liked it. More coming soon.~Jim
Chris McFadden posted a comment on Friday 12th December 2008 1:06am for The Dykstra Shuffle
Yet another reason Dumbledore gets on my nerves. I've heard some great covers of "Paint It Black". <smirks> Some very nice work there.
JBern replied:
I've been chided for not using "Play With Fire" instead. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. More coming soon.~Jim
Jderig posted a comment on Friday 12th December 2008 12:44am for The Dykstra Shuffle
Ha, excellent. One of your best chapters in any story.
JBern replied:
Thank you for the compliment.~Jim
Matthew Sands posted a comment on Friday 12th December 2008 1:41am for The Dykstra Shuffle
JBern replied: