To Fight the Coming Darkness
Why Lucius Will Never Eat Corn Again
By JBern
Reviews
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 18th April 2007 5:56am for Why Lucius Will Never Eat Corn Again
Jeez, poor Luna! I almost want to say "poor Marcus!" but can't bring myself to it. Superb chapter. You're so good at these action scenes.
JBern replied:
Thanks!~Jim
DaZZa posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 2:30pm for Why Lucius Will Never Eat Corn Again
Minor nitpick
"He was worried about the tow of them, but it wasn’t the only thing on his mind."
I think it should be "worried about the two of them".
I'm liking this story more and more as it goes on. Keep up the great work.
JBern replied:
Fixed. Glad you are enjoying the story!~Jim
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 2:11pm for Why Lucius Will Never Eat Corn Again
Now Susan can know she's not weak - she can't be dead.
Great Snape sacking.
JBern replied:
Snape getting sacked was a definite highlight of this chapter. Hope you like the changing dynamic between Hary and Dumbledore. They are working more or less as equals now.~Jim
Brian Donnely posted a comment on Thursday 27th December 2007 6:28pm for Why Lucius Will Never Eat Corn Again
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