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Brian Donnely posted a comment on Thursday 27th December 2007 6:28pm for Why Lucius Will Never Eat Corn Again

First his parents, and now his would-be girlfriend brutally raped into near-insanity? Neville's going to go fucking NUTS.

JBern replied:

Nice to see you spotted this ahead of time.  You also forgot that the rest of his family was killed off i chapter 5 and 6.~Jim

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 18th April 2007 5:56am for Why Lucius Will Never Eat Corn Again

Jeez, poor Luna! I almost want to say "poor Marcus!" but can't bring myself to it. Superb chapter. You're so good at these action scenes.

JBern replied:

Thanks!~Jim

DaZZa posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 2:30pm for Why Lucius Will Never Eat Corn Again

Minor nitpick

"He was worried about the tow of them, but it wasn’t the only thing on his mind."

I think it should be "worried about the two of them".

I'm liking this story more and more as it goes on. Keep up the great work.

JBern replied:

Fixed.  Glad you are enjoying the story!~Jim

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 2:11pm for Why Lucius Will Never Eat Corn Again

Now Susan can know she's not weak - she can't be dead.

Great Snape sacking.

JBern replied:

Snape getting sacked was a definite highlight of this chapter.  Hope you like the changing dynamic between Hary and Dumbledore.  They are working more or less as equals now.~Jim