Turn Me Loose: A Harry Potter Adventure
I Was Such a Clown
By JBern
Reviews
jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Saturday 6th February 2010 4:22am for I Was Such a Clown
Outstanding story so far!!!! I'm definitely glad I decided to read this!!!! Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please!!!!:):):):)
peruvianprincess posted a comment on Sunday 17th January 2010 9:17am for I Was Such a Clown
This is a fine pickle you've gotten us into!
bannanacupcakes posted a comment on Thursday 14th January 2010 1:25pm for I Was Such a Clown
Love it :)
micky the hat posted a comment on Tuesday 12th January 2010 1:08pm for I Was Such a Clown
Just cast my vote for you best of luck!
Mesterio posted a comment on Sunday 10th January 2010 5:36am for I Was Such a Clown
Epic. Loved Daemon Petunia. I Wonder; If Dudley could gets saved he could have a change of heart and become like a sidekick of India Jones to Harry. Might be amusing as comic relief, and I bet he and Hack would have a lot in common.
Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Sunday 10th January 2010 12:31am for I Was Such a Clown
Uh oh!
Kreacher points to the caved in entrance. "Dark Lord is out there waiting for Bad Master."
This sounds like a bad time to be Harry Potter suddenly I find myself wishing that I wasn't...
I love the way this story is written putting yourself into the story in Harry's spot. I haven't read many stories like this and it is refreshing definately my favorite part of this series!
metrobluejay posted a comment on Saturday 9th January 2010 10:11pm for I Was Such a Clown
Oh no, that's all I can say, Oh no. Shit's really going to hit the fan next chapter.
GinnyLover posted a comment on Saturday 9th January 2010 6:39pm for I Was Such a Clown
The house elf part is easy. They have to have be asked to transport someone. Regulas never asked and Dobby sure wouldnt have been.
Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 9th January 2010 5:31pm for I Was Such a Clown
Good chapter. Thanks for writing. W.
Lathena posted a comment on Saturday 9th January 2010 4:10pm for I Was Such a Clown
Another awesome chapter.
Random comments:
I appreciate how your characters actually get hurt, makes things more realistic.
I wonder what has happened to dudley, I'm sure you will share eventually.
Good show on closing the super house elf plot hole, we wouldn't want things to become boring.
Cool we are dealing with Voldie again. I've almost missed him. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Sure Hermione isn't actually pregant?!? That would be to crazy.
Anywho, thats all I can think of for now. I love this story and can't wait for more.
Riegert8 posted a comment on Saturday 9th January 2010 3:12pm for I Was Such a Clown
This is a good chapter
Sarah5 posted a comment on Saturday 9th January 2010 11:10am for I Was Such a Clown
I love your fic grim amusing betrayal mixed in to top it all off a great read.
morriganscrow posted a comment on Saturday 9th January 2010 10:23am for I Was Such a Clown
Wow! That was quite a ride!
Loved how Snape basically took over the Order, and the scene with Hermione. I hope she and Harry do have a healthy child, and can go on to forge a positive relationship, free of anyone's manipulation.
The Monster!Petunia was a brilliant touch, and your fight scene, as always, was brilliantly done.
I am hanging out for the next update.
Clell65619 posted a comment on Thursday 7th January 2010 3:24pm for I Was Such a Clown
- Yet another amazing chapter. Making the Beast with Two backs seems to have humanized both Hermione and Harry toward each other.
- Harry's plan for the Weasleys is ingenius, looking forward to Ginny being ignored.
KDDR22 posted a comment on Thursday 7th January 2010 9:42am for I Was Such a Clown
As usual very entertaining. Always look forward to new chapters
David
DrT posted a comment on Thursday 7th January 2010 8:06am for I Was Such a Clown
Good thoughts on elf-transport, and, of course, a great chapter!
Vukk posted a comment on Thursday 7th January 2010 12:18am for I Was Such a Clown
Your house elf thoughts make sense. The only way to counter would be a house elf could take someone only if willing and who would have asked an elf. If your used to just telling the elf what to do and thinking their stupid, who would ask or even think of asking?
joeBob posted a comment on Wednesday 6th January 2010 11:14pm for I Was Such a Clown
I've been reading a fair amount of mediocre fanfic lately (just about to go back to *gasp* real books ;-) ). But, then along comes another update of: fairly tight, coherent, entertaining writing (it does still have several noticeable typos).
Thanks!
>> It’s probably female, but then again with Lucius on their side, you can’t
>> be certain.
:)
>> Why didn't Dobby just kidnap Harry in year 2?
There's a story idea: A "Misery" and Harry Potter crossover with deranged Dobby front and center! :D
DobbyElfLord posted a comment on Wednesday 6th January 2010 10:58pm for I Was Such a Clown
Great chapter! Loved the input from Kreacher at the end. I am looking forward to see how Harry gets out of the cave.
BTW: If Harry keeps up this pace, he might be able to field his own Quidditch team by the time he's twenty-five! One definate and one possible and not even 17 yet.
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 1st September 2010 6:16am for I Was Such a Clown