uNople posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 11:21am for The Rivers are Full of Crocodile Nasties

wow. I am really pleased on how you finished this story. I look forward to the next one with great anticipation

JBern replied:

Thanks.   Glad you enjoyed it.   I'm proud of finishing my first fanfic.~Jim

Claudia R posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 11:20am for The Rivers are Full of Crocodile Nasties

Good, a little time skip to have us settled!
I liked how you handled it! I specially liked the patronus healing!
Th Golden Rules!!! I was missing them! Some time I am going back to read through the story in order to find all of them!!
The planning of the trouble for for Dumbles was lovely!
The Goblin scene is priceless! I loved it to bits!! And the way it ended, very nice I was expecting to never hear what would happen to Zar and his crew!

And I so wish I knew what took place when Moody and Kwan met! not a chance to see an omake on that is there?

I know that Hack in England will be awesome! Having to declare him is a very funny image, but I can see why a not registered troll would be trouble.... I liked the shrunken inferi hoard comment, or though since it reminded of the one in last chapter... he may get his hoard yet!

and the bounty hunters negotiations round... one of my favorite parts... specially the bantering over his head!
The moment with Lauren was unexpected... I didn't think he would take her up on that, but it would be nice for him to be able to have someone for whom to survive the war for, and the child might give him that.

Luna's mention of Fleur was great... and if she ever followed through her threat I think she would be the happiest witch in the World and not only Europe!

I loved the chapter to bits and it was a nice way to wrap it up, and still leave it clear to connect with the Sequel, and putting the musics at the end was great!

I will look forward to the sequel even if I know we won't be getting it soon...
still if you have any missing scenes of the 'verse it would be nice to see them!!

And the Kwan Moody meeting was something I would be greatfull to see, and of course more of what Fleur had been up to!

I loved your characterization of her! She is a adult woman who can be a real sister to Harry and help him understand the feminine world in a way no other man can help! Not mention sisterly teasing is one of the best brands of pepper-up potions there are!!!

JBern replied:

Well thank you for a massive review.   Maybe the sequel will explore when Kwan first met Moody.~Jim

Prospero Hibiki posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 11:17am for The Rivers are Full of Crocodile Nasties

Yay!
Good read...and I should really be inside the Rickover building studying for my CMR final...but the story was too good to pass up! And well worth it.
Oh well off to clean up after my PFA this afternoon. Can't Wait to read the sequel.
-Prospero Hibiki

JBern replied:

Glad you enjoyed it.   Finally catching up on my backlog.~Jim