The Inner Eye of Harry Potter
The Year of the Rat
By JBern
Reviews
name posted a comment on Wednesday 25th November 2009 4:22am for The Year of the Rat
Very good site. Thanks!,
name posted a comment on Wednesday 25th November 2009 12:16am for The Year of the Rat
Nice site. Thank you.,
dimriver posted a comment on Monday 28th September 2009 10:33am for The Year of the Rat
Knowing the future is a very powerful force. Nice story.
Quackpotty posted a comment on Friday 28th August 2009 10:09pm for The Year of the Rat
Great story so far, and I look forward to more.
warpwizard posted a comment on Wednesday 5th August 2009 6:34pm for The Year of the Rat
Good stuff. I still smile at the very mention of "Colonel Sanders".
Tom Hackwood posted a comment on Sunday 2nd August 2009 12:40pm for The Year of the Rat
Thanks to "but I heard Albania is the place to be", I have the theme song to "Beverly Hillbilly's" in my head...
Evil!
darthloki posted a comment on Thursday 30th July 2009 12:17pm for The Year of the Rat
Hilarious!
echo posted a comment on Thursday 30th July 2009 8:10am for The Year of the Rat
loved it
Crys posted a comment on Thursday 30th July 2009 6:33am for The Year of the Rat
> The Dementor continued to whack its head against the ground, trying to crack the icy helmet with little effect.
*blink* Now that is a mental image . . .
> your experiments as a student were what led you to being selected as the youngest Potion Master in the last two centuries. Now, I hear that you accept no deviations from your instructions. Would you have been able to pass your own class under these circumstances?"
Good point, that
Having been out in the "real" world for awhile, Trewlaney seems to be more grounded than in canon. Not a huge change, but enough to notice.
Snivellus's arse? Really, must you torture us with those mental images?
Properly chaotic "fight" scene in Hagrid's hut.
Huh. Pretty abrupt ending to PoA. Still, entertaining that Colonel Sanders turns out to be the hero.
Looking forward to your next chapter (of anything).
Faith1 posted a comment on Thursday 30th July 2009 3:05am for The Year of the Rat
Once more you deliver a wonderful chapter!
I absolutely love this Harry, and I was very amused and delighted in the way he made a quick friend in Luna.
I also like how the Ravenclaws are starting to respect his predictions.
Thanks for writing!
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 29th July 2009 2:13am for The Year of the Rat
LOL at Sirius running away from Sybil's neutering him. Very funny indeed. I absolutely love the way you had them deal with the Dementor. That was hilarious.
Absolutely tiny spelling error: you mean "Undue influence" not "undo influence".
The arse itching curse was very funny and really quite evil. I like the teachers' argument too. You really were in filthy mode when you wrote the Dobby scene. So funny.
I was pleased to Colonel Sanders put to such good use. I loved the way you rewrote the Prisoner so that things were so very different. Great chapter. More please.
DrT posted a comment on Tuesday 28th July 2009 5:57am for The Year of the Rat
Well, I for one find this story v. amusing!
BaltaineShadow posted a comment on Tuesday 28th July 2009 3:28am for The Year of the Rat
That was a really cool third year!
I'm really looking forward to year four... and I wonder what'll happen to Sirius.
Also it should be interessting to see what Harry and Auntie Sybill predict before the fourth year starts... should be funny.
Jeffrey Meehan posted a comment on Tuesday 28th July 2009 2:47am for The Year of the Rat
This isn't funny. At least I don't find it funny. You are a fantastically talented writer but more often than not I can barely stand your stuff.
dan26 posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 6:24pm for The Year of the Rat
A unique concept of a story with a uinque harry potter. This is interesting to also legitimize sybil showing up in harry's third year
Vongsawat posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 3:29pm for The Year of the Rat
lol~ loved the fic tho i question why Dumbledore didnt try exorcising Peter or at least trying to keep him contained in some manner.. (unless such an action is impossible??? or at least time consuming) even if it is required by Sybil's prophecy. and didn't Dumbles ever contemplate just telling Harry that divining the answers to his tests is cheating?? i mean, Minerva wouldn't do that as she heartly hates Divination and doing so would mean she believed it, but i don't believe Dumbledore has that stigma (or at least not quite that big a stigma) tho it may just partly be his allowing for the teachers to deal as they believe tho that would in turn question why he decides to bring Harry under his personal wing unless, again, it is due to his worries that Sybil has pushed Harry too much into Divination and foregone other skills such as Transfiguration (or dada or charms say) of the more physical of magical aspects that would , in Dumbledore's view, be a much more defense against the dark times to come. mm. rambling~.. love the fic =p
MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 1:49pm for The Year of the Rat
"Why do Dumbledore’s oaths always involve my arse!"
-too funny! That and the poison ivy joke had me laughing for a full minute
Dobby started to pull the Hogwarts towel he wore like a robe open. Harry’s quick action stopped the elf.
-oh my
Loved the pratfall full fight at the end.
baumgal2 posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 1:27pm for The Year of the Rat
This is a really fun story, I am especially growing to love your Dumbledore. So many other stories have him as the manipulative bastard - which can be great - but it's nice to see the good side of him.
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 1:21pm for The Year of the Rat
*snicker* Now that's a fun variation on canon Third Year and I had to control my laughter when Remus dropped the Dementor out of the train; I have to wonder if it ever managed to get out of that ice prison, not that I care overmuch. This was quite the spritely chapter of Divining!Harry's adventures and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter to see how these events affect his Fourth Year.
AlexanderLogan posted a comment on Friday 10th May 2013 6:41pm for The Year of the Rat