Crys posted a comment on Thursday 16th April 2009 4:00am for Head Games

That whole dueling club conversation: AD volunteered him. HJ coulda said, "Shove it, old man," or something similar, couldn't he?

> I’ve heard that a person’s self image defines how they appear in a Pensieve,
Interesting concept, but I'll have to disagree. Otherwise the "facts" of what everyone watches would be interpreted (skewed) by the original viewer.

> but if violence is required, I’ll be polite about it."
*laugh* Good definition of "diplomacy"

Good dueling scene w/Olympe

Ironic that her family thinks he is her youngest boyfriend.

Logan_MacLeod posted a comment on Thursday 16th April 2009 3:43am for Head Games

Potter for 3 he shots.... He scores!!!!!!!!!! Awesome chapter

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Thursday 16th April 2009 3:33am for Head Games

LOL at Harry's line about having to kill himself if he admitted they might need Snape. Poor HJ has to learn that Dumbledore isn't Supreme Mugwump for nothing.

I'd be interested to know if the virginity rituals would work for Harry. I know how dirty minded HJ can be, only the Hat more so, but his fourteen year old body is one.

The conversation with Fleur's parents and the resulting line about Harry's diplomacy ending with destruction was very funny. I have to say I miss the Hat though I can see why he wasn't included as any idea of Harry's own refinement would have vanished.

I don't think I've ever read a fic where Piers has been used in that way before. Fascinating way to make this go from fluff to darkness in mere seconds. I also liked the Knockturn Alley detail - I could see them doing it actually.

The stuff about Fleur's mother was also nicely thought out. Again, don't think I've ever read her written this way. I like your bit about Veela and King Arthur - twisted, dark and ever so practical.

I think the Hat is going to be so filthy over the broomstick encounter - and yes I spent half of it counting potential double entendres with Harry - that my computer may explode. Excellent chapter. I loved it.

And yes, you're Amazon review is coming just as soon as I finish my library book before it goes overdue.

uthamm posted a comment on Thursday 16th April 2009 1:52am for Head Games

Nice. Awesome interaction and getting dark - Interesting how you are isolating Fleur from her family.

The Maxime/Harry duel was excellent - how about a DD/Harry duel? Can't wait to see what happens to Krum and I don't think we have seen the last of Snape and Karkaroff, have we?

Awesome Harry/Fluer at the end - very tastefully done.

Excellent work, thanks for sharing the talents!

Renzo7 posted a comment on Thursday 16th April 2009 12:42am for Head Games

Great chapter, and awesome set of scenes with Fleur... Gotta love your characterization. Keep up the awesome work and please update soon.

peruvianprincess posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 11:40pm for Head Games

Still fresh and original. Nice move forward for the romantic relationship.

AgentScorpion posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 11:19pm for Head Games

Awesome! I think that sums it up. By the way, I was expecting Bill to turn up at some point. Did I miss it?

Gaelyn posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 8:23pm for Head Games

G'luck with HHH and Dead Eye. If they are as good as your fanfic, you'll be making it big in no time.

Loved this latest chapter. Well done.

DiscountNinja posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 8:10pm for Head Games

Great stuff :D I wondered how you'd deal with Fleur and his biggest secrect - I am glad to see that it has not been made into a problem :)

Also, more dueling - always good :D you really have a knack for writing fight scenes :D

NWL posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 8:07pm for Head Games

Haven't finished it, but noticed a spelling typo - a couple identical typos, actually. At several points (I noticed it in the preparations for the Embassy trip), you spell Madam Maxime's last name as "Maxim" without the e at the end.

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 6:36pm for Head Games

Wow. Once again, all hail the conquering author. I love your work.

morriganscrow posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 5:50pm for Head Games

A fine, full-bodied chapter, with robust tannins and a lingering aftertaste of ripe fruit.
An excellent vintage Chateau JBern all round.

Zicou posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 4:49pm for Head Games

That was great, awesome!!!
It could be funny to see a demonstration between two duelist masters : flitwick and Maxime!!!
Continuuuuuuuuuuuuuue!
Z.

IceBlades posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 4:00pm for Head Games

A good ending. Though, as with every story I finish, I'm disappointed it had to end. I feel that you might be looking to pick this story back up at a later time.

Great twist using Madame Maxime as a duelist.

I look forward to more of The Inner Eye now that Lie is over.

Happy Writing

vandallas posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 3:03pm for Head Games

making love FTW

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 2:55pm for Head Games

Outstanding chapter!!!! I get this feeling that Harry and Fleur's relationship might just stand the test of time, am I right???? Will we be seeing any little Harry's coming from there loving of each other???? Will there be any fall out from Harry telling Fleur about himself???? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please!!!!:):):):)

Jon posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 2:52pm for Head Games

loved the one-liners... they're fantastic.

i'm guessing the summer stay at the dursleys would be more tricky this time, with piers' death.
it's a great, humorous chapter
looking forward to see Ron-Fleur interaction. should be amusing, but i'm guessing the story is shifting towards the climax, so i'm looking forward to serious story telling next chapter..

MOD posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 2:28pm for Head Games

Yet another fantastic update! Yahoo :)
Seems to be building up nicely for a grand finale

Alvin Au posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 2:04pm for Head Games

good chapter!! cant wait till you update again...

btw, is your original novel going to be available for sale in bookstores or online? seeing how well you write fanfics, I will probably be tempted to try your novels... at least i wont have to wait for updates to get to the end of the story!! LOL

take care!!

baumgal2 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 1:57pm for Head Games

This was great - especially the ending ;)
Seriously though, I like the way you are developing their relationship.