Magus posted a comment on Friday 22nd May 2009 7:56am for Humiliation and Other Diversionary Tactics

Holy crap, that is a good cliff. Thank you for this chapter and thank you for your book, Quite like it and an ample recomendation.


Keep up the great episodes from this saga and Turn, however Inner Eye almost makes me pee by laughing so hard

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Friday 22nd May 2009 7:35am for Humiliation and Other Diversionary Tactics

Another well written & exciting chapter, thanks.

whatareyouevensaying posted a comment on Friday 22nd May 2009 6:52am for Humiliation and Other Diversionary Tactics

Of course his right arm doesn't work...good thing James was a lefty. It should be a decent match, though, since Voldemort isn't in his own body.

This update was superb, from Hermione's glib response to the Lie to Krum's abject humiliation. I think he'll (unfortunately) feel a bit better about himself after Harry survives another duel with Voldemort. Moony may not, though, and I'm having trouble discerning how I feel about that.

The dilemma, for me, is actually the same thing that worried me at the start of this story: The afterlife. While I'm an atheist, HP canon is pretty clear that everyone but the ghosts goes elsewhere, so my question becomes: Has James "gone on", and merely left a carbon copy of his memories with Harry, or was he held back? It's one thing I doubt you'll cover in this story/series (not that I can blame you, I avoid that rot whenever I can), but I can't help but wonder.

Looking forward to more.

joeBob posted a comment on Friday 22nd May 2009 6:37am for Humiliation and Other Diversionary Tactics

Awesome chapter, per usual. Everything works: the fights, the relationships and meetings with allies...
The writing is clear and engaging and it's fairly easy to track the developing situation. It still amazes me that you have about the same number of beta errors, in 10,000 words, that I do in 500.

Thanks for an awesome story.

Shepherd posted a comment on Friday 22nd May 2009 6:30am for Humiliation and Other Diversionary Tactics

Great chapter and an excellent cliffhanger. It is interesting to see how Krum, much like Draco Malfoy, considers himself to be in a rivalry with Harry while Harry considers them to be annoyances who are beneath his notice.

marcelhm posted a comment on Friday 22nd May 2009 6:02am for Humiliation and Other Diversionary Tactics

well you did it again, u actually managed to completely surprise me with how you took the story and the events themselves. guess that is why I'm such an avid reader of your stories ^^. well I can only say, till the next chapter!

DiscountNinja posted a comment on Friday 22nd May 2009 5:21am for Humiliation and Other Diversionary Tactics

Whoa, noice JBern! Noice! :D I'm totally stoked for the conclusion here :D I take it that the tri-wizard tournement is going to take a back-seat here :P I'm still really hoping that Harry wins though :P

Nice job with the Marcus Flint switch - very interesting :D I guess he's probably done a Quirel, but gone a bit further? :) then again, knowing your stories, it's probably even worse :| :D
Discount,

jhamez posted a comment on Friday 22nd May 2009 4:50am for Humiliation and Other Diversionary Tactics

Excellent chapter! I've been a long time reader of your stories and second only to Bungle in the Jungle this is my favorite. Please keep up the good work and I look forward to the next installment.

Clell65619 posted a comment on Friday 22nd May 2009 4:41am for Humiliation and Other Diversionary Tactics

- Excellent. Tommy boy possessed Flint? Never saw that coming.

- As fitting for a far more intelligent HJ, your Tom Riddle is a far more intelligent foe, though I suspect his stupid need to prove that he could kill Harry rather than have it done will end up biting him on the ass.

- Can't wait for the next (final?) chapter.

Shawn Cullipher posted a comment on Friday 22nd May 2009 4:38am for Humiliation and Other Diversionary Tactics

Goodness me, I need to try typing reviews when I'm not tired. Forgive the horrible grammar. I know it annoys me to read it, I'm aghast I actually typed it.

Shawn Cullipher posted a comment on Friday 22nd May 2009 4:36am for Humiliation and Other Diversionary Tactics

Awesome chapter as usual. You're writing just gets to me every time, no matter which story it is. As for your location next weekend, man, that stinks. I only live three hours away and would love to meet you in person, but I'm renewing my vows with the wife and I don't think she'd understand a side trip.

Have a good time in the Queen city.