Sterling posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 4:13pm

Okay, Harry is channeling his father....very interesting. You always come up with some great ideas and you present them well and entertainingly, I can't wait for an update on this one. Though at the moment I'm looking forward to seeing how you wrap up Bungle in The Jungle :-)

JBern replied:

Bungle finishes in 5-7 chapters.   Darkness in 8-10.   This one will carry through until August.   The sequel to Bungle will probably start then.~Jim

carlinonthebrain posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 3:36pm

i like this alot. I've never read a merge story with this as its merge point. its ounds very interesting and i hope to read more of it. cheers

JBern replied:

Thanks.   The next chapter is due out in 5 days.   I hope you continue to enjoy.~Jim

Nyeshet posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 3:29pm

Hmm, so Harry is actually James partially re-incarnated - the latter's 'essence' or memories of former life or whatever only awoken after being faced with a hundred or so dementors at once? (Yes, I can see how a hundred dementors could do that - considering that just one is enough for Harry to recall memories from his infancy).

It will be interesting to see where it goes from here - a Harry with James' (upon death) memories . . . .

JBern replied:

More will be revealed as time goes on.   Next chapter in 5 days.~Jim

saint posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 2:49pm

Great one. I particularly like the sarcasm. I hope the chapters will be longer (nothing too much - 10-15k a chapter), multi chapters posted at the same time (once or twice a week), etc, etc. Joking aside a great start.

Beers
Saint

JBern replied:

Nice joke!   Sorry.   I intend to keep the chapters in the 4-6K range posting weekly.~Jim

keebler_elmo posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 2:40pm

amazing. The story was nothing amazing until that last segment, where it was fantastic. I can see you really taking this in a great direction. Keep up the good work and update soon.

JBern replied:

Thanks.   It's good to see that part of the story was able to grab your interest.   I hope to continue to pique your interest.~Jim

Winterknight posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 2:07pm

this is nice, with an easy flow, making for a smooth. easy read. I like how Harry's distraction with the headache allows the experience and comfortable confidence of, i assume from the summary, his father, to put itself forward without him really noticing. This is a promising beginning.

JBern replied:

Thanks for the review.   I hope to keep exceeding your expectations.~Jim

Ltank687 posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 2:05pm

sweet

JBern replied:

Thanks.   Next chapter in 1 week.~Jim

agent fisher posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 1:25pm

Hmmm, quite interesting. I look forward to the next chapter.

JBern replied:

Thanks.   Next chapter in 1 week.   See you then.~Jim

Roberta Johnson posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 12:52pm

Well, now this is looking yummy! Keep it coming! And, thanks!

JBern replied:

Thanks.   Next chapter in 1 week.~Jim

Terry Swain posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 12:47pm

This has the promise of a great story. looking forward to more.

JBern replied:

Thanks for the review.   Next chapter in 1 week.~Jim

asvaldson posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 12:41pm

OMG!!! I love it! More please! *whine*

JBern replied:

Thanks for the review.   Don't whine, I'll post another chapter next week.~Jim

Gibby posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 12:22pm

Well, so far it's great. I hope you can keep up with 3 stories at a time because I'm a big fan of your other stories. Anyway keep up the good writing and I hope to see more of this story.

-Gibby

JBern replied:

3 stories told from 3 different perspectives no less.   I will do my best.~Jim

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 11:52am

This is a very interesting start. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Keep up the good work.

JBern replied:

Thanks.   Look for the next chapter in 1 week.~Jim

Heir of Gryffindor posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 11:38am

Wow, this a great story. It also has a very unique plot line. How often do you plan to update it?

JBern replied:

Weekly for as long as I can keep up the pace.~Jim

Arye posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 11:33am

holy c%#& that was awesome! love the idea, love the story! please update soon!

JBern replied:

Thanks.   Next chapter in 1 week.   Hope to keep exceeding your expectations.~Jim

freakyfinger posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 11:28am

Well, this is certainly an interesting start. I really want to see how this turns out.

Is James now living inside of Harry? Or is just part of James with Harry and is now emerging?

I really, really, want to see whether Harry is going to keep this a secret or start asking for help; whether he will continue to be a seeker, or go chaser; and how you will make this a H/F story . . .

JBern replied:

Next chapter in a week.   It should clarify your questions, well at least a few of them.   For the rest - stay tuned.~Jim

shyamseshadri posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 11:19am

I love the story so far, how ur slowly building up the fact that harry suddenly has extra knowledge. Now I know from the summary where it comes from, but I am just curious to see how Harry realizes that. I loved the Chaser, and the Runes touch. Update soon.

JBern replied:

Glad you liked it.   Things will clear up a bit next chapter.~Jim

Jenni posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 11:16am

Very very interesting... Not a bad way to go with this...

JBern replied:

Ironically, it was his father that saved him at the lake... Next chapter in 7 days.~Jim

Prospero Hibiki posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 11:00am

Looks great so far. I'm looking forward to reading the next part.

The only thing I can think of to improve it might be to work on the transitions a bit. Things seem a bit choppy. Still above and beyond most of the stuff I suffer through in my attempts to defrag my brain here at Nuke School.

Keep up the good work.
-Mongoose

JBern replied:

NUKE SCHOOL!!!!!   Oh God don't get me started.   8 and 1/2 years as ex Nuclear MM1(SW) ELT Jim Bernheimer at your service.   My ex roommate now an officer teaches down there in Charleston.   Back in the day it was in Orlando.

I'm out of the Nuclear business for good now, (after a two year stint as a Radcon tech at Newport News) but I still have the memories....

Best of luck on the exams keep the nose to the grindstone.   Try and stay off the mando hours try to avoid shotgunning the answers and being MOTO (Master of the Obvious) - if they still grade the exams the same way.

Jim

Donald Deutsch posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 10:16am

Interesting story so far, so is he being Possessed, or helped by his mother? This is interesting and a new plot twist that I have never seen done before. Keep up the good work.

JBern replied:

Wrong parent, you'll see things shape up next chapter.~Jim