To Fight the Coming Darkness
It's Always Darkest
By JBern
Reviews
rune1806 posted a comment on Saturday 10th November 2007 1:34pm for It's Always Darkest
i can not wait, please beta fast!
JBern replied:
Not up to me. It's with my editor.~Jim
James posted a comment on Saturday 10th November 2007 12:46pm for It's Always Darkest
fantastic new that this long epic is drawing to a close, although this story standard is mile ahead of 99.9% of other fanfics it pales in comparison to your other two WIP.
Another excellent chapters, your newspaper articles weren't the best, but I'm probably been over critical seen that my history is in journalism!
Excellent chapter Jim
JBern replied:
I thought it was pretty good in the vein of Rita. I was doing my best to write from her mindset.~Jim
ahsun92 posted a comment on Saturday 10th November 2007 12:02pm for It's Always Darkest
GASP! cliffhangers..... sob sob sob
OMG what will happen!!!
Killer ending to a a killer fic
JBern replied:
Thanks. The end will be here shortly.~Jim
tula posted a comment on Saturday 10th November 2007 11:27am for It's Always Darkest
you sir are a tease!
Great chapter, but that evil cliffhanger after all this time is almost more than i can bear!
JBern replied:
Well, the finale would have been a tiresome 16000 words. I decided to break it up in two. Sorry about that. Well, not really.~Jim
DrT posted a comment on Saturday 10th November 2007 11:19am for It's Always Darkest
It will be interesting to see what games are being played.
"T"
JBern replied:
Hopefully, you shall be entertained.~Jim
kainboa posted a comment on Saturday 10th November 2007 11:14am for It's Always Darkest
great chapter as usual, can't wait for the next one.
keep up the great work :)
JBern replied:
Thank you. The final chapter will be here shortly. I hope it impresses you.~Jim
jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Saturday 10th November 2007 10:53am for It's Always Darkest
Outstanding chapter!!!! So we'll get the last chapter before the Epilogue by say what Wednesday? I can't wait because I want to read how Moldieshorts dies and how you kill off the Banshee! I know you could always have Ginny scream at it or my ex-girlfriend! So any chance of Harry actually living past this next fight with Moldie? What kind of jobs will Harry be able to git after he finishes school since he's basically spent all of his time training to kill Moldie? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please!:):):):)
JBern replied:
I think the end will impress you. I'm glad to see this story finish.~Jim
Fishburne posted a comment on Saturday 10th November 2007 10:03am for It's Always Darkest
Btw, have I said how much I love this series, hmmm?
No?
sad. Anyway, I really like the fact that St. Potter and his nemesis are diametrically opposed. Whereas LV would be clamoring on stage to be the one in front of the people (if the positions were reversed), HP demures and wishes nothing to do with it.
I really like the level of detail that you have in your characters, and hell, I even like Narcissa.
JBern replied:
What's not to like about Cissy? I look forward to your comments about the finale.~Jim
Fishburne posted a comment on Saturday 10th November 2007 10:00am for It's Always Darkest
BOOYAH!
LET THE GAMES BEGIN!!!!!
JBern replied:
Aptly put.~Jim
dwilken posted a comment on Saturday 10th November 2007 9:44am for It's Always Darkest
You, Sir, are a two-bit four-flushing dirty rotten low-down expurgated indiscriminate LITERARY TEASE! Other than that, nice setup for the finale, with your oodles of plot threads. Looking forward to whatever disastrous ending you've concocted for our heroes/villains.
I still love how your version of the arch-villain has only one true weakness: His ego.
-dwilken
JBern replied:
Well, it would have put the final chapter at 16000 words. That seemed a bit long. I hope it impresses you.~Jim
Cuey posted a comment on Saturday 10th November 2007 9:40am for It's Always Darkest
Finally time for the action :)
JBern replied:
Almost! I just need it back from Kokopelli.~Jim
Gardengirl posted a comment on Saturday 10th November 2007 1:57pm for It's Always Darkest
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