Jim_xinu posted a comment on Wednesday 8th October 2008 2:47pm for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

Great chapter. Excellent humor, a good bit of action and adventure, and a cinematic story line in this one.

I'm wondering if Svetlanna isn't Baba Yaga herself out screwing around. But that seems a bit too cliche for your work. :-)

Thanks for sharing this with us. And good luck with the new baby. :-)

Schwing posted a comment on Wednesday 8th October 2008 1:36pm for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

and congrats on the newbie

Schwing posted a comment on Wednesday 8th October 2008 1:34pm for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

great chapy keep it up

Patches posted a comment on Wednesday 8th October 2008 7:54am for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

Congratulations on the new baby! Boy or girl? I really like this chapter. Harry saves the day again with a makeshift cave. That was excellent. Sveltanna is interesting. Harry seems to find the babes everywhere he goes. I like Hack! He is cool. He likes babes too! This is getting interesting. They have to fight their way all the way to a bigger fight. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing. pms

JP posted a comment on Wednesday 8th October 2008 12:25am for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

Congratulations on the new sproglet - I hope he/she is well and you are all getting enough sleep! Loving the story and most impressed you manage to write anything with a new little one!
The Wombat

Anthony May posted a comment on Tuesday 7th October 2008 12:36pm for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

Man J-Bern you are awesome. This story is GREAT. Can't wait for the next update. Congratulations, on your child.

Carol Layland posted a comment on Tuesday 7th October 2008 9:10am for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

Hi Jim, I just sort of found this addition to your wonderful story list. Your writing is both immaginative and coherent so it is easy to read and I enjoy it very much.

Saturn_Dragoon2 posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2008 7:28pm for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

New kid? Congrats man!!!

jcates posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2008 5:33pm for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

The whole scene, style, and feel is completely unique to any story I've ever read. Well done.

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2008 3:40pm for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

I loved this chapter. Keep it coming, and keep the suspense going.

kwp posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2008 2:30pm for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

Oh, and congratulations on your new baby!

kwp posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2008 2:28pm for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

I enjoyed this chapter, as I have enjoyed and continue to enjoy this series.

I found the language used by Svetlanna particularly interesting. I don't think there is anything she has read that actually rules out her being Baba Yaga... Not that she need be, but rather that I found the interchange interesting when viewed from that possibility.

JBern replied:

Thanks for the review.   I'll be working on chapter 10 shortly and it will answer your question definitively.~Jim

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2008 1:41pm for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

Loved this part here, fun to see how the group makes its way to their final point, as well as seeing Harry get some much needed relaxation as it were. Svetlana is an interesting character, and looking forward to seeing what all she is about exactly. Hack rocks as usual, and is just a heck of a guy as it were.

Ben10 posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2008 11:51am for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

It's impressive that you can keep up with writing not just 'one', but TWO awesome fics.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2008 11:26am for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

Harry the stud is at it again. I think that Svetlanna is the Witch that they are look for and this is her way of testing them.

Thanks for writing
MPF

stealacandy posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2008 9:21am for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

A typo: "Out in the field is a bad place to lose sight of why we're" ... why what? A word possibly more, are missing here. I think "here", as in "why are we here" should do the job.


-mo

Portus posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2008 7:28am for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

The casual use of sarcasm is one of the many things I really enjoy about this fic and it's prequel. Your Harry is becoming the jaded person that anyone not written by Rowling would become when dealt hand after crappy hand by Fate.

This chapter seemed a little short, but in truth that might be a reult of my devouring it in probable record time. How is it I can be a speed-reader with this kind of thing but not when it has to do with work or assembly instructions?

I look forward to the next chapter of this and "Lie".

Marvin posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2008 6:51am for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

This chapter's a master piece. Really.
Good jokes, good description, fantastic action, really, I'm impressed.
Thanks, congrats to your baby, and keep up the good work!

MG

Loopy Dane posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2008 5:11am for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

Congrats on the little jimmy! (or jimette?)
Thanks for another good chapter!
No, Svetlana couldn't possibly be a plant! And is certainly not Baba Yaga herself... Heh.

vasilis01 posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2008 4:45am for I Gotta Do It My Way (reprise)

Once again excellent update.