Andreas Nagel posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 12:20pm for I'm Even On My Knees

Nice touch on old russian children tales. You have now Baba Yaga it left over Koschei the deathles with his soul in a needle that lies in a egg that is in a duck ... . I liked especially his interaction with Sheila.

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JBern replied:

I'll do my best to do the legends surrounding Baba Yaga justice.   Thanks for the review.   Next chapter in 2 weeks.~Jim

riegert8 posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 12:19pm for I'm Even On My Knees

Very good chapter

JBern replied:

Finally caught up on my review replies.   Thanks for reading and I'm glad you continue to enjoy the story.~Jim

DrT posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 11:51am for I'm Even On My Knees

Baba Yaga? I am impressed.

JBern replied:

Thanks.   I'll try and do it justice.~Jim

Luan Mao posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 11:34am for I'm Even On My Knees

A good chapter, Mr B. TML doesn't grab me nearly as much as Lie does, but I like how chaos and his own mouth are keeping Super!Harry from romping freely.

You're doing an ok job of portaying powerful foes, but the mercenary team and Kwan seem to be polishing them off behind the scenes too smoothly. May we hope that Harry's own brains and abilities will play a major role in dealing with or destroying Baba Yaga?

JBern replied:

Don't count on that trend continuing.   The enemies are starting to get more powerful.   Hopefully after chapter 8 comes out in a few weeks, you'll be more invested in this story.~Jim