Turn Me Loose: A Harry Potter Adventure
Tried to Tie Me Down
By JBern
Reviews
MagyarEagle posted a comment on Friday 30th October 2009 9:04pm for Tried to Tie Me Down
Actually just finished reading both this, and your novel, and I must say I loved both, especially your original work: Dead Eye. The opening of that story was sheer genius; "I volunteered for Mr. Bush’s war. A few years later, a roadside bomb selected me for something else altogether. Now, I help people with ghost problems. Occasionally, I help ghosts with people problems. No one really helps with my problems"
Great work on that, and I hope a sequel is coming soon, as I am definitely eager to here more of both Harry's and Mike's stories, especially more of Mike.
dimriver posted a comment on Friday 30th October 2009 7:05pm for Tried to Tie Me Down
Snicker. Unexpected attacks work way better. I'm very glad to see another chapter of your story. Thank you for writing.
grovepjp posted a comment on Friday 30th October 2009 6:59pm for Tried to Tie Me Down
Welcome Back.
I had the good fortune of rereading Bungle and this one earlier in the week.
It is good as ever.
Keep it up
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M2J MandalorianJedi posted a comment on Friday 30th October 2009 6:38pm for Tried to Tie Me Down
Wow... I honestly think this is the first fic that has ever had both Harry and Snape working together to bring down Dumbledore while still hating each others guts.
Impressive, to say the least despite the short chapter. Hope to see more soon. I was a great read.
Jonathan Langford posted a comment on Friday 30th October 2009 5:22pm for Tried to Tie Me Down
Nice. I'd like to see (a) a relatively happy ending for this story (but I'm beginning to have my doubts), and (b) Dumbledore actually, definitively get what's coming to him. This chapter at least gave us a tiny smidgeon of that, but I'd like to see more. Alas, you've made it so that Harry--despite his growth--still isn't able to pull one over on Dumbledore without the help of a superior schemer such as Snape.
It will be interesting to see what you do with this...
heathw posted a comment on Friday 30th October 2009 4:29pm for Tried to Tie Me Down
I love Harry (and Snape's) more "mature" response to Dumbledore. It's pure literary gold. I've never been much of a fan of the "greater good" speaches. I think it better left to angsty teens and the partially insane, it feels like a rather poor excuse for an intellectual. That being said, I recognize it's almost a biblical reference as far as the indy Harry fandom goes. I'm glad to see you picked this back up and thrilled to hear you have another original work on the horizon.
Renzo7 posted a comment on Friday 30th October 2009 3:56pm for Tried to Tie Me Down
Wow! That was extremely unexpected, but so fitting. Great twist to the story!
Keep up the awesome work, I just downloaded your ebook and will start reading it tomorrow. I hope you update soon.
Jearom posted a comment on Friday 30th October 2009 3:32pm for Tried to Tie Me Down
Wow... I am speechless. It will be interesting to see where this goes from here.
MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Friday 30th October 2009 3:11pm for Tried to Tie Me Down
Dead Eye free? No way, people gotta pay. It was only a couple of bucks to start with.
By the way, as much as I enjoy reading your fanfiction, I enjoyed Dead Eye much more. Stop this stuff, put Spirals of Destiny (teen girls and unicorns, sheesh) on hold, get to work on on Dead Eye II.
Clell65619 posted a comment on Friday 30th October 2009 2:58pm for Tried to Tie Me Down
- I'd forgotten just how good this story is. Thanks, well worth the wait.
- Though in all honesty, I'd have loved to get a reaction scene from Hermione... Maybe next time.
mwinter posted a comment on Friday 30th October 2009 2:48pm for Tried to Tie Me Down
Glad your back. Interesting Chapter.
yerocfponk posted a comment on Friday 30th October 2009 2:25pm for Tried to Tie Me Down
Awesome glad to see more TML I'll have to start over cause I don't remember what was happening anymore.
Taegeous posted a comment on Friday 30th October 2009 2:00pm for Tried to Tie Me Down
I'm glad Harry got one up on Dumbledore, even if he had to partner with Snape to do it, but REALLY, REALLY can't stand your Dumbledore, and I want to see him suffer for the pain he's caused. Anything else would be unsatisfying.
GinnyLover posted a comment on Friday 30th October 2009 10:22pm for Tried to Tie Me Down