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gadriam posted a comment on Saturday 13th February 2010 6:01am

Brilliant, and the mild homage came through just fine. Now i have to find that one in English, though.
I enjoy Harry's peculiar innocence. You make the best plot twists out there and certainly the best corruptions. Padma, her response to her elevation, her fall from grace to heights unimagined was brilliant. Her response and description of the loss of elevation was chilling.
The little details you gave about the Centaurs made the whole race somewhat more real, and the punishment of Umbridge was highly credible. I have read of similar hazings among "primitive" human tribes.
Luna? The very "hands-on" seduction looked very odd which i guess is just in character. Her names for her bodyparts was fantastic. Considering the literary origin, i expect an oyster-eating rhyme in the future...


joeBob posted a comment on Saturday 13th February 2010 5:36am

Haven't reread the chapter yet. This is just a note that the email alerts from FFA don't seem to be working (didn't get notice of this chapter).

Might pester Tim about that.

Bedrup posted a comment on Friday 12th February 2010 8:05pm

You ´re always a treat to read. Getting through other stories is often like wading in mud. Yove got to push and puash to get anywhere. I ´m just sort of sailing your updates. Thanks.

Wolfric posted a comment on Friday 12th February 2010 7:28pm

Great chapter. I've always liked Luna. Thanks for writing. W.

Anthony May posted a comment on Friday 12th February 2010 7:11pm

The Mighty J-Bern. It truly is a delight to see you have updated. All of your stories are on a level far above the above-average! Can't wait for the next update - also dying for an update on Turn Me Loose too!

whatareyouevensaying posted a comment on Friday 12th February 2010 5:52pm

Incredible update, you really brought this story up to another level this time. It was great as a humor piece, don't get me wrong, but this chapter was richer. Good thing Harry doesn't care as much as most about his reputation.

Looking forward to more.

lmahlerdd posted a comment on Friday 12th February 2010 5:21pm

Great Chapter. I've been reading your stuff for a while now, but I'm a self-admitted horrible reviewer (for which I apologize). I really enjoyed Padma's description of losing her knowledge toward the end, it was simple and powerful. Thanks for the great reads, and I promise to be a better reviewer from now on:)

Riegert8 posted a comment on Friday 12th February 2010 4:07pm

Good chapter

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Friday 12th February 2010 3:42pm

Something I forgot to mention on ffn that I thought was cool was the two sticks tying in there, with both of them leading to the destruction of horcruxes then. Will look forward to what happens in year six, and what this may mean as Harry has already done a lot of the work, and if Dumbledore will try to do better by him, especially as he'd done so with Umbridge's detentions, and hoping that Delores will get hers that she didn't seem to in the canon.

Black's Phoenix posted a comment on Friday 12th February 2010 3:40pm

To be honest I kinda feel like the whole Luna relationship was a cop out. Out of all the possibilities I would have thought you would have gone for something different. Going with Luna seems like too obvious of a choice as of course he would end up with the girl that is just as wierd as him.

Clell65619 posted a comment on Friday 12th February 2010 1:33pm

- wow.

- Not much else to say. I realized what was happening as I read it, but still, wow. While the previous chapters were all hoots, this one is... well, maybe not deep, but at very least intense.

- An excellent resolution for Umbridge...

- Poor Padma.

- Luna it seems is a pushy broad. Absolutely nothing wrong with that, she knows what she wants and does what she needs to do to get it. Next year looks to be fun.

- I'm finding it highly amusing that loopy!Harry is getting more tail than canon!Harry ever thought about.

kdsmashedpotatoes posted a comment on Friday 12th February 2010 1:01pm

GREAT chapter! I like how everything was planned out, especially with the horcruxes.

Also, I loved the stick action in there. Kreacher and Luna, both whacking people to save the day. Fantastic. Only thing better would be a duel between the two.

And the Clue reference made me laugh out loud.

Thanks for the update! ^^

noylj posted a comment on Thursday 11th February 2010 12:29am


Hawklan posted a comment on Thursday 7th January 2010 3:22pm

ROFL... nice way to handle the egg thing :)
and also the scene on the cemetery was fun to read and Diggory didn't die :)

joeBob posted a comment on Thursday 7th January 2010 1:12am

4 is not the first non-prime number, 1 is. This ruined the whole chapter!

But, congrats on yet another new first in HP dragon-busting. :)

On several good chuckles, too.

Uncle Buck posted a comment on Friday 1st January 2010 9:31pm

This story is agrivating. I see the relavence in the argument 'why?' only because JKR didn't put basic instruction in the book, but I will have to get back to this story later. What would one think throwing a student into transfigure something without the cautious and CAREFUL preparation. pushing magit through a wand even without instruction is likely to produce the type of things that happened in Olivanders. First years oh the Hogwarts Express pointing their wands could still harm without knowing spells.

aemilyl24 posted a comment on Wednesday 16th December 2009 11:21am

Great story so far! I do hope you plan on continuing it. Keep up the great work, and please try to update again soon!!

Tracy0652 posted a comment on Thursday 3rd December 2009 1:51pm

I absolutely LOVE this story. It's whimsical and funny and it cheers me up every time there's a new installment. Thanks very much!!! A very happy holiday season to you!

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd December 2009 10:49am

This was a great section there, and really enjoyed how things went with Harry and Lavender there, as well as Luna and her fun times, and Colonel Sanders continues to rock.

whatareyouevensaying posted a comment on Tuesday 1st December 2009 4:02pm

Excellent update, as always. I was wondering how you'd get Harry through the Triwizard Tournament, and I'm still scratching my head over that one, so great work!

Actually receiving a paycheck again just in time for Christmas, so I'll be sure and pick up all of your published works in the near future.

Looking forward to more.