By JBern
Reviews
Rasgara posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 1:48pm
I love it, i hope there is another chapter soon. awesome.
smileys,
rasgara
JBern replied:
I've got 4-5 chapters of Lie to finish before I start rolling the rest of this story out. I'll have most of it done soon, but I"m spacing things out to give me the time to write a proper ending for the Turn Me Loose story.
stuart posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 1:42pm
Nice, a bit of a fun story. It feels like christmas you and bobmin posting so close together, if Ruskbyte will post some culture I might faint!! Look forward to the next chapter. Cheers
JBern replied:
Well, you'll notice Full Pensieve just posted as well! There's a trifecta for you.
Kathleen posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 1:35pm
LOL. Awesome!
JBern replied:
Thank you. I hope the rest of the story impresses you as well.
Everyoneknows posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 1:30pm
A very amusing story. I'm looking forward to more, though not as much as I am to TLIL.
JBern replied:
Next weekend for chapter 22 of Lie.
mjc posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 1:23pm
Poor Hermione...
She's probably going to want to do a header off the top of the Astronomy tower by the end of her second year once Luna and Harry start hanging out together (probably most of Ravenclaw will be joining her...)
I love how you handled Vernon's 'aversion' to all things magical...
Great start, "Lie" first, then the rest of TML and this interspersed? Or this before the rest of TML?
JBern replied:
Well it's okay if it helps Vernon pocket some coin. I'm toying of a scene to start the 2nd year of Hermione riding in the same car as Luna and Harry.
Lie finishes first. This one will be completed and released either on a weekly or biweekly basis while I put some serious effort into writing the conclusion that TML deserves.
Mark Blaine posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 1:17pm
This was indeed funny. Good work
JBern replied:
Thanks. Glad it gave you a chuckle.
Odelia Riddle posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 12:46pm
Brilliant
JBern replied:
Hope the rest impresses you just as much.
E5150 posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 12:44pm
Heh, this was lots of fun to read. Looking forward to more.
JBern replied:
More coming when I finish Lie. I think you'll like what I have in mind.
Ezra'eil posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 12:37pm
Like the new story. Somewhat original take on MInerva... Think I've seen it before, but not sure... Hope for a quick update!
JBern replied:
I'd be curious to know where you've seen something like this before. Glad you liked it and I hope it continues to impress you.
Glrasshopper posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 12:35pm
Can't wait for your next chapter. It's going to be very interesting to see what happens to the inhabitants of Ravenclaw Tower when there are two "crazy" people there.
JBern replied:
Yeah, it should be a real "Looney Bin." Sorry, couldn't help it. More coming soon.
skulLXeon posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 11:56am
Well, that just about had me laughing all day through work.... :) awesome start... i'll be on the lookout for this.... and of course, The Lie.... and TML.... =) see you around... and keep up the awesome work...
JBern replied:
Glad you had a smile on your face through the work day. More after Lie concludes.
heathw posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 11:26am
A truly original take on the Potter Saga. But, what else could we expect from your ever inceasing skill. Of course, not knoing what happens after the "rape" in TML is killing me! I expect this new project will be a tough one, but I know you will pull it off with exceptional style.
JBern replied:
I'll do my best. This whole story is an exercise to see if I can really write humor. As I said to another reviewer, I don't think people will be confusing me with Nonjon or Blot anytime soon, but I wanted to test my comedic chops out.
Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 11:00am
This was entertaining. I cant' wait to see some more of it.
I impatiently await some updates of the other stories as well. :)
Rob
JBern replied:
I'm working on it. Lie 22 next weekend. More on the way.
noylj posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 10:52am
I would think that someone or something could warn harry about the mind-raping twins.
Nice story, but it is so hard to take Sybil seriously.
JBern replied:
Precisely why this is a humor fic. Most of my stories have a dark edge to them. This one is more meant to be a romp.
redwoodhouse posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 10:50am
bravo, bravo on an interesting twist and unique story
JBern replied:
Thanks. Glad you liked it. More of this to be posted after Lie concludes.
Joe Fenton posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 10:49am
This is perhaps the most interesting take on someone else influencing Harry as he grows I've yet read. Normally it's all stories of Harry learning to fight and combat spells, so Harry shows up as some kind of "bad-ass". This Harry is rather refreshing - the way he won his "duel" with Draco was hilarious! :)
JBern replied:
I predict that I win therefore I win. Simple, pure and beautiful. Hopefully, I can keep the humor casual and not forced throughout.
KenF posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 10:47am
This was fun. I hope you decide to finish it.
KenF
JBern replied:
I've got most of the 7 yrs laid out already. This story is fairly 'easy' to write. It'll will be released between the conclusion of Lie and the conclusion of TML and will give me the time to craft the ending of TML that it deserves.
peruvianprincess posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 10:30am
This was hilarious! Thanks for another fun story. Looking forward to more.
JBern replied:
Thanks!
qwikshot posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 10:30am
this was GREAT! i can hardly wait to read the rest of the chapters
thanx for sharing,
qwik
JBern replied:
Glad you liked it.
Neil Glover posted a comment on Friday 3rd April 2009 1:52pm
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