Faith1 posted a comment on Thursday 30th July 2009 3:05am

Once more you deliver a wonderful chapter!
I absolutely love this Harry, and I was very amused and delighted in the way he made a quick friend in Luna.
I also like how the Ravenclaws are starting to respect his predictions.
Thanks for writing!

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 29th July 2009 2:13am

LOL at Sirius running away from Sybil's neutering him. Very funny indeed. I absolutely love the way you had them deal with the Dementor. That was hilarious.

Absolutely tiny spelling error: you mean "Undue influence" not "undo influence".

The arse itching curse was very funny and really quite evil. I like the teachers' argument too. You really were in filthy mode when you wrote the Dobby scene. So funny.

I was pleased to Colonel Sanders put to such good use. I loved the way you rewrote the Prisoner so that things were so very different. Great chapter. More please.

DrT posted a comment on Tuesday 28th July 2009 5:57am

Well, I for one find this story v. amusing!

BaltaineShadow posted a comment on Tuesday 28th July 2009 3:28am

That was a really cool third year!
I'm really looking forward to year four... and I wonder what'll happen to Sirius.
Also it should be interessting to see what Harry and Auntie Sybill predict before the fourth year starts... should be funny.

Jeffrey Meehan posted a comment on Tuesday 28th July 2009 2:47am

This isn't funny. At least I don't find it funny. You are a fantastically talented writer but more often than not I can barely stand your stuff.

dan26 posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 6:24pm

A unique concept of a story with a uinque harry potter. This is interesting to also legitimize sybil showing up in harry's third year

Vongsawat posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 3:29pm

lol~ loved the fic tho i question why Dumbledore didnt try exorcising Peter or at least trying to keep him contained in some manner.. (unless such an action is impossible??? or at least time consuming) even if it is required by Sybil's prophecy. and didn't Dumbles ever contemplate just telling Harry that divining the answers to his tests is cheating?? i mean, Minerva wouldn't do that as she heartly hates Divination and doing so would mean she believed it, but i don't believe Dumbledore has that stigma (or at least not quite that big a stigma) tho it may just partly be his allowing for the teachers to deal as they believe tho that would in turn question why he decides to bring Harry under his personal wing unless, again, it is due to his worries that Sybil has pushed Harry too much into Divination and foregone other skills such as Transfiguration (or dada or charms say) of the more physical of magical aspects that would , in Dumbledore's view, be a much more defense against the dark times to come. mm. rambling~.. love the fic =p

MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 1:49pm

"Why do Dumbledore’s oaths always involve my arse!"
-too funny! That and the poison ivy joke had me laughing for a full minute

Dobby started to pull the Hogwarts towel he wore like a robe open. Harry’s quick action stopped the elf.
-oh my

Loved the pratfall full fight at the end.

baumgal2 posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 1:27pm

This is a really fun story, I am especially growing to love your Dumbledore. So many other stories have him as the manipulative bastard - which can be great - but it's nice to see the good side of him.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 1:21pm

*snicker* Now that's a fun variation on canon Third Year and I had to control my laughter when Remus dropped the Dementor out of the train; I have to wonder if it ever managed to get out of that ice prison, not that I care overmuch. This was quite the spritely chapter of Divining!Harry's adventures and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter to see how these events affect his Fourth Year.

Anthony May posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 12:52pm

J-Bern! Oh it is so good to have you back updating. You are the standard I measure everybody against. I know it is unfair to everybody else but you have the greatest story telling abilities! I look every day for an update from you - especially for Turn Me Loose! Keep up the great work!

dwilken posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 11:48am

God help me, but I'm starting to like this story.

~Doug

blue artemis posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 11:25am

That was hysterical. I love the idea of Peter getting killed by the chicken.

Wolf550e posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 10:09am

"was greeted by a most peculiar site" - sight

"as soon as the get their wands" - they

"had an undo influence" - ?

A smirk at "Gelly".

"a nasty itch on his backside" - laying it on thick, do you?

"it is only fitting that something he and those he has wronged will have a hand in his undoing." - grammar. missing something like "made".

The old "why didn't Peter show up on the map throughout third year" plot hole.

It was OOC for Lupin not to consider the ramifications of Peter being alive. In canon he did.

Dumbledore could have easily contained and exorcised Peter, if he though the ghost could be a danger. Barty Crouch Jr. can revive Voldemort in his stead.

dave g posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 9:57am

Unique. Bizzarre, but unique. Very well done.

impatientuser posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 8:56am

The best chapter yet. You have an unnatural gift for writing Dobby. I almost spit chocolate milk at that scene.

I like this Harry. I look forward to seeing more. =)

Wolfric posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 7:13am

That had to be the best setup, nuetering Padfoot scene, I've seen for a while. There was one involving Giny and Fudge, that I read a long time ago, that was pretty funny. Great chapter. I caught the reference about Albus and "Gelly" skinny dipping and Harry should tell the twins about poisen ivy underwear, I'm sure Snape wouldn't be able to sit for another month. Thanks for writing. W.

Dracolych69 posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 5:56am

Nice. Should be interesting to see what happens with the "Flesh of the servant, willingly given, you resurrect your master", and yeah, here's to a better month.

whatareyouevensaying posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 5:45am

Pettigrew as a ghost? That's even worse than Myrtle!

This update was as amusing as ever, I'm especially glad that Snape was humiliated for his actions.

Looking forward to more.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2009 5:34am

Great chapter, thanks.