Carol Layland posted a comment on Saturday 13th June 2009 2:46am

Truly a most unusual story that is curious to read as it is so very different from canon. At first I had trouble centering the story but as I read it became very clear where you were going. I am enjoying this story very much. Thank you for writing it. Carol Layland

dic posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 9:53pm

liked it. thx.

and I liked dead eye too, bought it on smashwords. thank you, and keep it up!

Jimmy posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 7:08pm

lmao! GIANT CHICKEN?? LMAO!

M. R. Moore posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 4:01pm

I love your Colonel, it reminds me of that old Scooby Doo episode, The Frickert Fracas, where Scooby and Shaggy get chased around by a giant rooster that ate some secret growth accelerator... stuff...

AgentScorpion posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 3:35pm

If I was as a good writer as you, I'd be able to tell you how awesome this was, but as I'm not, you'll just have to settle in the knowledge that you have written the first two chapters to a very funny fic.

kb0 posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 2:26pm

That was really funny! I'm not sure what was best... Ginny finding out that the boy she had a crush on wasn't what she expected. Harry destroying the book by writing in it with a blood quill. A giant chicken named Colonel Sanders. Or that Lockhart made a move on another teacher (and forced at that). All 4 were good things. Of course, you having him get along with Luna so well makes a lot of sense. :) I look forward to the other chapters.

Kevin

fountaam posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 2:07pm

Love Colonel Sanders!

morriganscrow posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 2:05pm

I have to say this is the most...um...unique version of Harry I've come across in quite some time.

Excellent, albeit brain-spinning, chapter.

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 1:22pm

I'm enjoying this fic more and more with every new chapter. Great inclusion of the Chinese Calendar, very funny about the Rotfangs, and I'm really glad that Harry and Luna are friends. Kefep up the good work!

Wolf550e posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 1:16pm

"but she and her the other female Gryffindor second year" - editing mishap

"I thought the ‘'Trapped Boy’ was the Colin Creevy" - remove "the"

Ginny riding Harry's giant cock is amazing!

When will Dead eye be available on amazon.co.uk?

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 1:15pm

For some reason I am stuck with the vision of Harry's Giant Rooster teaching DADA until the end of the year when Hermione gets fed us and tells everyone that Professor Boo is just a giant chicken.

Michael posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 12:56pm

I think I broke something giggling.
Is Col. Sanders going to be kept by Hagrid (why am I asking this? its funny to think of for something to study in Care of magical creatures.)
Keep up the great work

shawn151 posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 12:41pm

BWAHAHAHAHAHA! This is epic. The funniest thing I've read in years. I must admit this is just the most absolutely original canon take I have ever read. This is also my all time Favorite story ever. Seriously his meeting with young Tom is simply overkill on the hilarious meter.

Jeremy DuCharme posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 12:22pm

Colonel Sanders *snicker*

"He's a chicken I tell you! He's a giant chicken!"

Joe Fenton posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 12:02pm

I thought it was pretty clear who "The Trapped Boy" was, but that's the advantage of being a read who knows all about Harry Potter to begin with. :) Another excellent chapter. This is one of the most likable Harry's I've come across. Like Luna - a little odd, but very friendly. I love how subtle, but powerful, divination is in this story.

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 11:19am

Very amusing chapter. Excellent alternate uses for canon artifacts and events.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

Chaos_Mancer posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 11:10am

nicely done

Lyman Louie posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 9:54am

Another great chapter. Very original in your way of destroying Tom Riddle and the Basilisk. Can't wait to see the rest of the years. You also perfectly set yourself up the next year. You also could've used the Year of the Dog as well, but Year of the Rat seems more appropriate.

blue artemis posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 9:12am

This is really cute. I can't wait for the other years.

grovepjp posted a comment on Friday 12th June 2009 8:12am

hehe