luckykas posted a comment on Thursday 25th December 2008 8:18pm

A very interesting and action packed chapter. The goblin revolt was expected with all the happenings in Brazil but what caused it in Britain? Was the death of Arranger the catalyst? Voldemort getting the homoculus could be interesting, what will he do with it? Make a better/younger body for himself? He already has Harry's blood in his veins. Also wont the blood wards be pointless now? Every chapter I read in both your ongoing fics opens up many avenues and keeps the story really interesting. Thank you for such an engaging tale... Looking forward to updates.

hpkuarg posted a comment on Wednesday 24th December 2008 6:24pm

I'm just waiting to see more of Luna. You do seem to have a wrong bent, shag with a seven hundred year old witch? I'm sorry for Harry, heh. I'm really digging the story though. Thanks a lot!

Ezra'eil posted a comment on Sunday 21st December 2008 4:54pm

Hahaha! Poor Harry, gonna catch so much grief over this.... And after you have finished this have you put any thought into a Harry/Bellatrix pairing?

jhbwolverine posted a comment on Monday 15th December 2008 9:30am

I just thought of this, and it doesn't really relate to this chapter at all, but I thought it was funny so here goes. Harry and Bill should at some point run into some kind of ward that creates two translucent blue walls of energy in a hallway, blocking them in and slowly contracting in. Maybe it'll crush them or disintegrate them, something cool. And it would be called...The blue screen of death.

marcelhm posted a comment on Thursday 11th December 2008 9:11am

thank you as always for the great entertainment. although I must say that either I'm getting better at recognizing your style or your getting predictable ;) I had a bet against my brother who also reads your stories that baba yaga would be svetlana.... you had me stumped with the attraction to harry cos of the horcrux though :P

Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 11th December 2008 5:44am

Great chapter. Good fight. I was suspicious of Svetlana, as I'm sure I was supposed to be. Good luck with your upcoming publication. Thanks for writing. W.

heathw posted a comment on Tuesday 9th December 2008 11:47am

I cannot help but think this series would make a pretty exciting action movie. Always a pleasure to read your work.

Ben10 posted a comment on Monday 8th December 2008 2:07pm

Ballin'!

Harry is such a player. It's a bit unfair.

Shea' Motsko posted a comment on Monday 8th December 2008 3:03am

Oh, very nice. Lots of brutal bloodshed swiftly followed by betrayal and then some dark secrets followed by a bit of down and dirty shagging. What more could anyone ask for? *grins* Oh yeah, utter humilation thanks to a flaming bird. *winks*

Gaelyn posted a comment on Sunday 7th December 2008 10:05pm

Keep up the wonderful work! I'm enjoying the hell out of this story. And who'd'a thunk that a 700 year old lady could bend like THAT.

-G

Darryn posted a comment on Sunday 7th December 2008 5:21pm

nice - I look forward to more

liquidfyre posted a comment on Sunday 7th December 2008 9:27am

Yick but still somehow tasty. Can you imagine the tricks she would learn in all that time?

Good chappie cant wait to see the explanations if any for that comment. *snicker snicker*

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 7th December 2008 8:08am

This was a really interesting and unexpected twist to the story. Of course it isn't that surprising that Harry was used this way. Of course he really wasn't that unwilling but I understand the conflict in his mind. At least the locket horcrux is destroyed. Now he has the cup, Voldemort himself and then the problem of the horcrux in his scar. Thanks so much for writing. I look forward to "The Great Goblin War." pms

mjbrown268 posted a comment on Saturday 6th December 2008 8:53pm

HAHAHAHA! Baba Yaga the metamorph! That was great!

After spending the last few days reading depressing and dark fan fiction and various sites this was the perfect chapter to read! The humor tied in with the fast paced plot was inspired!

Love this novel!

Jizzle posted a comment on Saturday 6th December 2008 3:39pm

Harry really needs to learn how to keep his mouth shut. Poor Luna.

Then again, Harry was tricked into boning a 700 year old soul eating crone. Poor Harry.

That was a pretty hilarious ending, though. Well done.

ladyimmortal posted a comment on Saturday 6th December 2008 2:31pm

Holy moley... is it possible to put more into a single chapter? I don't think so!

Brilliant as usual, J. Keep it up.

warpwizard posted a comment on Saturday 6th December 2008 2:10pm

Good stuff. Soul-hookah was cool. Baba-yaga nookie was...yeah. :)

Goblin wars, cool!

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Saturday 6th December 2008 9:03am

LOL!

Yes, Harry the legend shagger!

Excellent work. I figured who she was, but her eating Horcrux's was a great addition. I wonder what Tonks will think when she finds out about her.

Carol Layland posted a comment on Saturday 6th December 2008 6:19am

A well written chapter. Now all I have to do is go back over the whole story and put is all together in my head and then I can really set forth a true and accurate review of the whole story. In the meantime I do like it very much. Carol

Stormrizing posted a comment on Saturday 6th December 2008 6:01am

This is very good.

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