MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Monday 16th February 2009 11:49pm

Brilliant chapter. Good to see we're back to the cut and thrust of the action. Indeed I think you're story is "strking hard, striking fast and leaving chaos in its wake!".

Glad I have more to read. Thanks for writing.
Monkey

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Thursday 12th February 2009 4:26am

Great chapter as ever! I think TML was suffering and losing out in my league table of great fics due to the restriction of Hogwarts. Now that Harry is out of there this has all the best bits I liked about Jungle. Bravissimo!

I still love the funny names you come up with for things. 5 second frank was superb and Moody's 10 second troll was also even better!

Just one quick comment, what has stopped you from leaving the witty fanfic disclaimers? Not bored with it all are you.

Thanks for writing, glad I have more to read!
Monkey

bgoldnyxnet posted a comment on Thursday 5th February 2009 2:40am

Well, the course of true love never did run smooth. Just like Ron & Hermione in canon (and most H-G shippings), bickering until they finally realize what's up and settle down to snog.

(Except in the Dangerverse, where H-G, D-L, Neville-Meghan all seem to just settle on their partners right off. Even there, it takes Ron a while to get over his temporary snogging partner and choose Hermione.)

So we can only hope that Harry will soon realize how much he misses Luna, and Luna will realize how much she misses Harry as a friend (and snogging partner).

Looking forward to it all...

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd February 2009 8:00am

Great chapter! I'm quite curious is the hormuculus sentient? I think Barf would have been a better name.

I liked that Aberforth's "goat incident" was really a daemon and that he is as tainted as Harry.

Monkey

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd February 2009 4:40am

Brilliant chapter, love the disgusting hagrid and hack stuff. Dumbledore is a right git for doing that to harry was quite funny though.

Sorry I don't review and read so much now. Rebel Goddess and I used to read and chat on-line when we lived apart due to her being at uni but now we live together I can't find the time to read fanfic as she has a lot more free time.

I'm trying to as I enjoy your stories so much!

Monkey

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Saturday 31st January 2009 9:26am

I'm surprised he fell for that lotion. I saw ot coming a mile away. Moody told him over and over, but there really isn't a way for him to be too paranoid.

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Wednesday 28th January 2009 2:03pm

This is incredible. I loved this chapter. Dumbledore should be tried for forced rape of two minors. Actually, forced rape of two students, since I'm not sure they're still minors, but you know what I mean.

Dumbles is evil!

Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Thursday 22nd January 2009 1:16pm

heh awesome chapter. Harry certainly is getting alot of women in this story. Good for him! btw any idea where ic an get some of that salve?

Mesterio posted a comment on Tuesday 20th January 2009 11:13am

I WOULD say 'the plot thickens' but at this point you've thickend it to around the width of the great wall of china.

Keep throwing us curve balls, they've all had their own unique style so far.

Lathena posted a comment on Tuesday 20th January 2009 2:26am

things are really starting to heat up. I seriously hope that Granger wasn't given a fertility potion. btw, I guessed that the russian girl was baga yaga shortly after they made eye contact. It just made the most sense. There has been more cool battles, you have very creative thinking. I can't wait to see Harry deal with Dumbles again after this latest trick. Harry does seem to be become something of a manwhore-good thing he isn't dating Luna, then he'd be a cheating scumbag of a manwhore. Anywho, I hope you are one of the authors with the time and motivation to update regularly because I'm so hooked.

Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 18th January 2009 8:27am

Great chapter. I wonder what, if anything, Luna will have to say about Hermione being pregnant with Harry's child. There might have been more potential for humor if Harry had had Tonks or even both of them apply the salve. I don't suppose it would bother Harry too much to kill Malfoy and have Snape die as a result of some vow; Harry might see it as a bonus. Thanks for writing. W.

peruvianprincess posted a comment on Sunday 18th January 2009 4:21am

I like the way you're manipulating the original story line to make it come out nearly the same, but with a different series of events. This story is fresh and interesting. It's nice to have Harry actually thinking like a boy too. A lot of female authors can't pull it off so it's good to hear from the male side, although sometimes I don't want to know what boys are thinking! lol! Baba Yaga was a great character to add.

aroy924 posted a comment on Saturday 17th January 2009 4:45pm

I fuckin' love this story!!! Out of control, unpredictable, this is great. thank you for continuing to write

Immortalitis posted a comment on Saturday 17th January 2009 12:52pm

That was...freaky.

Some fun with the semi-erotic scenes, definitely amusing.

I'd have snickered if he accidentally turned into a jaguar, just for an epic lol.

I'm getting this disturbing image of Harry accio-ing the dividing baby right out of Hermione.

*Snicker*

Keep up the mind-fuck!

Regards
Immo

warpwizard posted a comment on Saturday 17th January 2009 10:55am

Nice twists.

fallingmonkey3 posted a comment on Saturday 17th January 2009 10:42am

Nice chapter JBern. Dumbles really is an ass of an old man. I really like the way you've written Harry. Like a gray Harry. Not light, not dark, but in between. Update soon!

Banner posted a comment on Saturday 17th January 2009 9:20am

Like Bill says, there is no bad sex. God, Dumbledore and Fawkes just had Harry rape her. The upside is that her youth (just turned sixteen if I have it figured right,) poor physical condition, and the stress will probably force a miscarriage.

rune1806 posted a comment on Saturday 17th January 2009 5:23am

I was trying to see why Hermione was not killed, then you drop in the date rape drug. You are makeing Hermione pay and pay for her actions over the summer. Still thinking about the bone mother on the drug, ok trying to move on. Great story "hard" to review...

DiscountNinja posted a comment on Friday 16th January 2009 11:40pm

JBern, you have written the most convincing dark-Dumbledore I have ever read - this is pure gold, it really is :D you've avoided all the cliches and managed to have Dumbledore do something so totally horrible but yet still seem within the boundries of things he might do, it is unreal :D

Paladin11 posted a comment on Friday 16th January 2009 8:30pm

I just read this again and was thinking about Snape's reaction to all the single mothers who might be sending Potter look alikes to Hogwarts