M2J MandalorianJedi posted a comment on Friday 5th December 2008 1:26am

B-E-A-Utiful! Masterfully done and all that.

You know... I suspected Sletvanna might have had something to do w/ Baba Yaga and even suspected that she and the crone were one and the same, but I discounted the second notion as soon as I thought of it. I didn't think there could be any way in hell that was possible... Especially after Harry added her as another notch on his belt, but once more you have surprised me and proved me wrong. Not too heartbroken about it though as it keeps me on my toes. Still, excellent work and hope to see more updates of this and "The Lie I've Lived" soon. They are easily two of my top 5 favorite Harry Potter- hell fanfiction- stories that I am currently following.

Matthew Sands posted a comment on Friday 5th December 2008 1:15am

Ahem. "W00t!"

That is all.

Well, not really. I had a feeling about Svetlanna, but wasn't sure how you were going to play it( there was always the off-chance of an agent of Dumbledore or Voldemort after all). Shame about Moody, but if you start to let people have character shields, then you have to come up with ever-more implausible means of keeping them alive, and after a while it's nothing but work, work, work all day long.

Looking forward to the death of the incendiary turkey this time around though.

dimriver posted a comment on Thursday 4th December 2008 10:03pm

Excellent story. Lots of action, good humor. Besides a troll familiar has to be the coolest thing ever.

M. R. Moore posted a comment on Thursday 20th November 2008 1:34pm

I have enjoyed these stories more than I thought they would...

Either way, I think Svetlanna is Baba Yaga in disguise... I don't even want to imagine what Bill would say about older women then...

I also suppose congratulations are in order for the man with a new baby.

kaptin_hippy posted a comment on Tuesday 11th November 2008 4:51am

Great. I really can't wait for continuation. I have some ideas of what may be in store later and am exited to see if I'm right. Keep up the great writing.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Friday 17th October 2008 4:00am

The sexual connotations of Moody's speech were very funny. It's good to see that Harry is still female-obsessed in a normal teenage way especially with Svetlanna and her dryadish blood. LOL at Professor Binns and the Goblin Wars being the most important class in the Hogwarts' curriculum.

The change in Harry's position is well underlined. I imagine he does miss those days in some ways, but probably not if he remembers how scared he was most of the time and Kwan's lessons. Harry's rationalisation of his activity with Svetlanna was hilarious. I also really liked that her return was "anti-climactic". As always, an exciting and well written chapter. I can't wait for more though I have my suspicions about Sventlanna's true nature. Great stuff.

Mesterio posted a comment on Thursday 16th October 2008 8:26am

LOVE IT! I still can't get over how much I like this style of writing. The unique way you do first person makes everything seem that much more epic.

Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 16th October 2008 3:28am

Great chapter. Good to see Harry get some satisfying sex; Hack can't have all the fun. Good action scenes. Thanks for writing. W.

warpwizard posted a comment on Wednesday 15th October 2008 3:21pm

Good chapter, held my interest until the end. Moar? :)

morriganscrow posted a comment on Wednesday 15th October 2008 1:50pm

Brilliant - as always!
The Hack scenes are always a joy, and Moody just adds to that. Poor Harry; stuck with him and Kwan!
I'm wondering if Svetlana is actually Baba Yaga, and if those runes she's doodling on Harry are significant.
I'm also wondering if I'm getting paranoid.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 14th October 2008 12:36pm

Good chapter.

gunny

joeBob posted a comment on Monday 13th October 2008 10:14am

Great chapter. The fights, as always were excellent.

So, did Baba Yaga kill her own grandmother?

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I just discovered that this site has been down for a while and Jeconais "authorised (sic) the deletion of over unsent (sic) 30,000 emails".

So, don't be surprised if the reviews were a little sparser, many people didn't get an update alert. I'm delighted to see that this story has been updated.

Gardengirl posted a comment on Monday 13th October 2008 3:13am

And the fun continues. Thanks for the update, and congrats on the success of both your fanfiction and your original stuff!!!

Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Sunday 12th October 2008 4:32pm

Heh awesome chapter. How I love my man-whore days.. oh wait I never had any.. why oh why did I marry young? The visual from your scene with Hak falling from the sky onto the other Giant made me laugh. The sled idea is pretty cool as well. Can't wait till the next chapter. Thanks for writing!

Good luck with the new baby they are alot of work (I have 2 toddlers at home at the moment thats loads of fun as well.)

Ph34r_n0_3V1L posted a comment on Sunday 12th October 2008 7:41am

Awesome read!! Really like these characters, as they all seem mortal (ie capable of blundering).

mhistbuff posted a comment on Friday 10th October 2008 12:53pm

This is the first time I've read either Bungle in the Jungle or Turn Me Loose. I have to say that reading in 2nd person is exceedingly strange, but you've written it very well. I'm enjoying the story a lot.

Banner posted a comment on Friday 10th October 2008 10:06am

Snow sledding with a tail wind sounds like fun, actually. I can't help wondering how a jaguar likes snow, though. This story is full of nifty ideas and wonderful turns of phrase.

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Wednesday 8th October 2008 2:47pm

Great chapter. Excellent humor, a good bit of action and adventure, and a cinematic story line in this one.

I'm wondering if Svetlanna isn't Baba Yaga herself out screwing around. But that seems a bit too cliche for your work. :-)

Thanks for sharing this with us. And good luck with the new baby. :-)

Schwing posted a comment on Wednesday 8th October 2008 1:36pm

and congrats on the newbie

Schwing posted a comment on Wednesday 8th October 2008 1:34pm

great chapy keep it up