Loopy Dane posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 10:13pm

Awesome story! Thank you for sharing with us.

MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 9:09pm

Excellent as always. Now get back to work on Ferryman II!

Dudley made me laugh and its his teaming up with the Prophet was also a chuckle.

Bedrup posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 7:26pm

A great end to a great story. Thank you for seeing it through to the end. But at the same time, I ´m sad there will not be more. Or will it?

dwilken posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 7:14pm

As always, very good and descriptive fight scenes, Jim. Thank again for seeing it through to the end.

BTW, especially good work with the Aberforth character. I always envisioned the old fart as one clever, innovative and *dangerous* SOB. You brought that out very well.

Well done.

Matt Harris posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 7:04pm

Wonderful conclusion, just sorry it is over.

Anansii posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 6:56pm

Whew! That was a wild ride. Thank you so much for finishing this thing up.. Something tells me you're not one of those authors who would like to meet their favorite characters in person. :)

Ezra'eil posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 6:31pm

Oh my. I feel sad now! What am I supposed to be all giddy about updating now this is over?! Ya know, you should write an omake where Harry does take a an army into hell to get Fawkes out. LOL

Olafr posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 6:08pm

Wow, an excellent ending to a wonderful ripping yarn. I've really enjoyed your work and this story has been a Must Read for some time. But it's also been an exhausting ride, and in a way I'm glad to see it end. (But not without standing and shouting, "Encore! Encore!")

Thanks very much for sharing with us - I for one am very appreciative.

whatareyouevensaying posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 6:02pm

Great ending. It's tough to add anything to that, really. In some ways it seems like there are a lot of stones left unturned, but to me, that just makes the ending more fitting. Harry's become too much of an adrenaline junkie like Bill to be satisfied with total quiet. It's also somewhat comforting to know that Fawkes will eventually be rescued, even if he has to die a few thousand times first. He won't hold a grudge, right?

Looking forward to...all of your future projects.

Ben10 posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 5:54pm

Amazing story sir. I would say your 'experiment' was a great success.

Stick97 posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 5:46pm

how eactly would child support work fo someone like Baba Yaga?

I have this mental image of a toddler being chased around by a house with chicken legs...


great story, and I would love to see what happens to Harry and his kids.

Tumshie posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 5:07pm

Like all good tales, it's sad when it comes tom an end, but as ever always good to see a story completed. Thanks for writing

Riegert8 posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 3:49pm

Well written chapter

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 3:12pm

OUTSTANDING ENDING!!!! I can't wait to see what you do next!!!! How many lovechilds does Harry actually have???? Is Hope Granger really Harry and Hermione's???? Do keep up the outstanding work!!!!:):):):)

Clell65619 posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 2:27pm

- Brilliant as usual Jim, thanks for the effort you put into this one.

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Saturday 13th November 2010 2:23pm

Wow. I honestly can't believe it's all over, and after having read this for the last, has it been over three years, I'm really glad to see a worldly Harry who is very much in command of his life. May I say that you invested the characters with a life that was sadly lacking from the ones in canon, but you did it with a lot of panache as well. Looking forward to more of your stories, including the sequel to DeadEye, and hope that the rest of the year and next are good ones for you.

Andrius posted a comment on Wednesday 10th November 2010 10:37pm

This was an epic chapter, especially since the part with the rift opening. I certainly didn't see that coming.

Yonexcannon posted a comment on Friday 5th November 2010 7:49am

Love this chapter and the entire story as a whole, so please keep that in mind when I say my only complaint is that Kwan deserved a better (or at least a more fleshed out) death scene.

joeBob posted a comment on Thursday 4th November 2010 2:25am

Reviewed elsewhere. Fine chapter; great story.

Mesterio posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd November 2010 2:46pm

love it. crazy things going on everywhere, cant not try to keep track of all of them. REALLY want to see how this goes.