coronal posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 2:11pm

"no. Hack's dick hurt."


ROFLMAO!!!!!

that's f**king AWESOME!!!

JBern replied:

I have to admit, I had been dreaming that line up for like 4 chapters and looking for the place to use it, similar to Thunderclouds declaration that he was never scared - the dragon was clearly chasing Harry.   It came off better than I imagined.~Jim

Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 1:07pm

love your Luna - altogether a much more satisfying chapter than the last
Thanks

JBern replied:

One of the hooks for this story was to do a version of Luna that is basically playing a big joke on everyone.   Though the easiest person to lie to is yourself...   ~Jim

Niamh posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 12:46pm

love it!!!

JBern replied:

Thanks.   I am going to start on chapter 14 tomorrow and it should be ready by the weekend. ~Jim

Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 11:51am

the last chapter was a complete jumble, making no sense what so ever, unless Harry is in some sort of brain damage loop or loops of memory with no link tothe outside world. no offense intended, but If I wanted to read demented ramblings I would pick up the congressional record or the democratic national platform.

hopefully he heals in the next chapter.

JBern replied:

Harry's confusion is intentional.   As you only recieve the information that Harry does, you may also be confused.   Next chapter should clear things up for you.~Jim

Bedrup posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 9:35am

Great to see you on this site. I ´ve been following your work on fanfiction.net. Are the chapters you publish here identical to the ones published on the other side, or have you remolded them so I should read them again?

JBern replied:

No other than a few grammar fixes, they are the same   chapters.   Chapter 14 should be up this coming weekend.  ~Jim

Yojo posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 5:11am

Amazing; the second person point of view is really unique, but is very catching; I can't wait to hear more about this spell chaining: it sounds really interesting. Would it be possible for you to go into more depth about spell theory and how they relate to languages? I really like the idea of the same or nearly the same curse in different languages, but would the wand movements be the same? Would it be possible to mix and match the words and wand movements if the latter is different since they all have the same results? Keep up the excellent magical theory ideas. Great job!

JBern replied:

Thank you.   I have finished uploading all the current chapters to the site and should have chapter 14 done by next weekend.   I really haven't gotten into spell theory as much as I have gone into runes, warding and animagery.   I'll probably touch on it in the spells in different languages in the next couple of chapters as I have almost finally caught up to chapter 1.~Jim