TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 9th January 2008 11:37am

Very good, it would be really strange to have people asking you to knock up their daughter. Tough work but lots of bennies.

gunny

JBern replied:

Different strokes for different folks.~Jim

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 9th January 2008 10:23am

Good chapter. What is Harry going to do with a single mom and her son. He can't just leave them to whatever happens. He could move them and get her a job. Lots of opeions.

gunny

JBern replied:

You already have the answer.~Jim

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 9th January 2008 8:45am

Very good chapter.

gunny

JBern replied:

Thanks.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 9th January 2008 7:50am

Very good action. Good story.

gunny

JBern replied:

Thanks.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 9th January 2008 6:49am

Very good chapter.

gunny

JBern replied:

Hopefully you appreciate Harry's "education."

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 9th January 2008 5:53am

Very good chapter. Harry is getting an education in life.

gunny

JBern replied:

And quite and education it is.~Jim

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 5:51pm

Very good chapter.

gunny

JBern replied:

Thanks.~Jim

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 4:19pm

Very good chapter.

gunny

JBern replied:

Thanks.~Jim

Brian Donnely posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 4:17pm

"Can never have too much cock at your disposal."
Hahaha, oh Bill, you and your perverted jokes.

Harry probably should've mentioned his theory on where it really is, eh? Voldemort does seem to have a "grandeur complex." If there's no such thing, then, well, he's the first one to have it. :)

Poor Sanchez. :( And there go Hack's only chances at getting laid!

I'm not getting a good vibe from Collins right now, something tells me he's going down soon. :'(

JBern replied:

Ah yes, Sanchez will be missed.   Interesting comment about Collins.~Jim

Brian Donnely posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 3:49pm

Haha, Bill and Collins obviously find little humor in that Monty Python counting argument, eh? Good times.

I knew you were going to find a way to bring in a necrodragon somehow. Got a certain fondness for them, maybe? ;) Air battle scene was very well done. I'm not sure, but are Abraxan known for being violent creatures? Or is it just the zombified ones that'll kick your ass?

The whole situation of them just idly sitting there sniping zombies like it's no big deal made me laugh pretty hard.

JBern replied:

Now I just need a Necrodragon in The Lie I've Lived...

As for Abraxans, Madam Maxim did worry that Hagrid would have a problem "handling" them, so draw your own conclusions.

I thought it was an interesting way to end the chapter with them simply eliminating zombies that had been such a problem earlier.   This of course means there is much more terrifying things coming...

Jim

Brian Donnely posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 3:06pm

Ooh hoo hoo! Going back to the action you teased us with in the beginning, I like it!

Harry and Luna's relationship is definitely getting more... heated. Harry does seem to have a serious case of foot-in-mouth.

Oh, Amy, you little minx... How Harry covered that whole thing up with her dad and all was genius.

I hope Kwan and Collins make it out okay. :(

JBern replied:

The whole Amy thing was a tribute to all those Porkys, American Pie style movies.

As long as the H/Luna feels like it could be a real relationship lumps and all, I'm pleased.

Define "okay."

Jim

 

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 1:54pm

Outstanding chapter. I really like Luna, she is a great charactor.

gunny

JBern replied:

Thanks.~Jim

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 1:00pm

Bummer, I always knew females were evil...lol.

gunny

JBern replied:

More people need to be warned!~Jim

Brian Donnely posted a comment on Monday 7th January 2008 5:10pm

Heh, totally saw that coming. Maybe not in all it's elaborate...ness? (that a word?) But damn, man. I should reallllly be getting to bed at this point and you stick me with a cliffhanger like that? Evil. :(

JBern replied:

Just think how much story you could be reading when you aren't sleeping.~Jim

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 7th January 2008 4:49pm

Very interesting start.

gunny

JBern replied:

Thanks.~Jim

Brian Donnely posted a comment on Monday 7th January 2008 4:27pm

Hahaha, damn I love Kwan... this story's hilarious.

Things between Harry and Luna seem to be progressing. It's very subtle, but it's there... :D

JBern replied:

Sometimes it's one step forward and two steps back.~Jim

Brian Donnely posted a comment on Monday 7th January 2008 8:21am

Hahahahahaha, Collins is hilarious. That was fucking awesome.

"No. Hack's dick hurt."

I should've heeded your advice to not eat or drink while reading this. My keyboard is now covered in rootbeer. Oh boy... haha.

JBern replied:

You were warned.   What can I say?~Jim

Brian Donnely posted a comment on Monday 7th January 2008 7:39am

Heh, the two bodyguards talking about Kwan and Collins like they're some kind of Hit-Wizard Gods was pretty cool. Makes me wonder how good they really are? Can't wait for some more action. =D

That letter from Luna was priceless. XD Good stuff.

JBern replied:

Thanks.   Kwan and Collins have a reputation as two very heavy hitters.   Glad you enjoyed it.~Jim

Brian Donnely posted a comment on Sunday 6th January 2008 5:18pm

That was a very interesting look at becoming an animagus (or is it animage?). The line, "his name was Asshole" made me laugh pretty hard. I like how you placed a significance on Harry being a Jaguar. For a reason I can't understand, it seems to be a very popular pick for his form, but is never given any meaning like you have.

Damn, Harry has some serious self-control. I don't know if I would've been able to say 'no' to a ready-and-willing woman just like that.

No naked Fleur here, but I suppose a couple mentions is enough to make me happy. :)

JBern replied:

Naked Fleur is a running joke through the story.~Jim

Brian Donnely posted a comment on Sunday 6th January 2008 4:32pm

I like Kwan, among earning my respect by not asking for a pay raise, he's funny as well, following that up with "You still stupid cook."

The whole 'fighting, not dueling' thing is something I've noticed in your stories now. I agree. Dueling is a gentleman's game, with rules. Not exactly the same as fighting for your life.

JBern replied:

Just think, you have a whole 'nother story of mine to read!   Wait until you see the fights still to come in this story.~Jim