By JBern
Reviews
MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Saturday 30th May 2009 12:01am
Great chapter. I really like how you are wrapping this up.
Loved the "blow your load in malfoy and suck it back out" line, that really had me chuckling.
Thanks for writing.
Monkey
JBern replied:
You're a strange individual...
Lee Dickie posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 9:50pm
Cracking good end to part 1, if a bit surprising in how matters developed. Well done & thanks.
JBern replied:
Thank you. I'm glad the story wasn't that predictable.
Infin1x posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 5:56pm
Considering I only barely got through the last book and haven't touched it since it would not be hard to improve upon that.
This chapter continues a standard you started in "To Fight..." your ability to in one chapter apologetically completely change not only the playing field but the whole game.
JBern replied:
Thank you for the compliment. I don't think the sequel wil be a gorefest like TFtCD, but you never know. Either way, I'm glad I could keep you thinking during the story.
Zicou posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 5:19pm
That was awesome !!!!!
I loved the "10 ways to keep fawkes happy", but it's sad that dumby died, because now Harry must take responsibilities so .. less fun, isn't it?
I can't wait to read more, and hope to read the sequel soon!
Continuuuuuuuuuuue,
Z.
JBern replied:
I thought people would enjoy the Fawkes angle. Just wait to see what I have in store for Harry and Fawkes in the coming chapters of TML.
Rexnos posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 4:28pm
I'm so sad it's over. The Live I've Lived has been a breath of fresh air in a fandom that can get rather monotonous. I'll miss the realistic Harry/Fleur ship, the intriguing main character, the hardcore storyline, and most of all, the bad mouthed sorting hat.
I can't wait for Christmas... The first chapter of the sequel would be the best present ever...
JBern replied:
Don't be sad. It just means that you can go back and reread it! I'll see what I can do about Xmas. No promises though.
Killedbykarma posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 2:50pm
VERY well done. An amazingly twisty and deadly end to a story filled with textual awesomeness. Once I actually have money I'll probably look into your novel too!
JBern replied:
You can pick it up on Smashwords for what you'd spend at a vending machine on a soda and some chips!
Thank you for the review. Now, on to my other stories.
TheHard posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 2:11pm
Man, what a great ending for this "part" of the story (wink, wink!)
The dead of Dumbledode. It was really well done, I haven't read a lot of stories with that part well done.
The Hat... well... We all love the Hat! We all want to see more of it! :D
Man, this his one of the best stories in fandom, ever! I just can hope to read something this good in my lifetime, again.
I really wish I can go and know you for the launch of your story (I'm a little "bit" far away, being from Chile and all that), but I'm really going to buy me a copy!
Thanks for a great story, and for sharing it.
Well, see you in the next chapters, of whatever story are you going to write. see ya! :)
JBern replied:
The best bargain for Dead Eye is Smashwords where it's a meager $1.99 US. It should blow your socks off like this fanfic.
I'll get on my other stories, so I can eventually work my way to Lie's sequel.
Secca posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 2:08pm
I really like the alternative that you gave us to Rowling's endings. I think that you managed a very nice tribute for Dumbledore, and I'm waiting for the sequel in anticipation.
JBern replied:
Thank you. I'm glad you liked the eulogy.
MOD posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 1:01pm
OMG! Dumbledore is dead! Thats really sad...
curious how the war will shape up with HJ unleashing his inner marauderer.
A fantastic story! You are a great writer :)
JBern replied:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Manatheron posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 11:02am
EPIC win! For the record I would consider this a finished story, but to each their own. Excellent work all the way around, and I hope to see more soon.
~Manatheron~
JBern replied:
Thanks for the compliment. It does stand decently enough on its own as a story. Hopefully, the sequel will be a suitable companion piece. I appreciate all your previous reviews as well.
Regards,
Jim
Mesterio posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 9:17am
I really hope this isn't the last of chapter for this, I can see things going further than this quite easily. But its your decision in the end. Hope you either continue this or create a follow up story.
JBern replied:
As stated in the author's notes, there is a sequel in the works, but don't look for it until fall or winter.
vandallas posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 8:28am
great chapter jbern, keep up the good work
JBern replied:
Thank you. Hope you keep enjoying the now completed story.
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 7:51am
Great story, can't wait for the sequel.
Pity it was this DD you killed off--how about a repeat on the TML DD? :-D
Good luck with Dead Eye.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
JBern replied:
Oh I have something in store for DD in TML... trust me.
Thanks for this and all your other reviews. I hope you enjoy Dead Eye when you pick it up.
grovepjp posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 7:35am
Now that was the shit...
I think i read there will be sql... but i recon it is in the distance...
Keep it up.. it is brilliant work...
Thanks,
flippie
JBern replied:
Thank you for the compliment. End of this year, or beginning of next for the sequel.
Anansii posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 7:29am
<i>like a Marauder</i>,eh. OK.... I think THIS is going to be interesting.
Good job, and looking forward to the sequel!
JBern replied:
Thanks. I hope the sequel impresses you when it comes out.
that1 posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 6:57am
Rats! ... (Yes, I am planning a sequel, but not until the end of the year).
I will be back in Kabul with a very very slow TCP/IP connection.
Oh well such is life.
Good job, keep it up!
JBern replied:
Well stay safe when you're over in that area. At least fanfic doesn't eat up much bandwidth. Pick up a copy of Dead Eye for some additional entertainment when you head over to that part of the world.
Wolfric posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 6:57am
Congratulations on finishing your fine story and on your publication. I continue to enjoy your work and look forward to more. Thanks for writing. W.
JBern replied:
Thank you for all your reviews. I certainly wouldn't be this prolific without people's encouragement.
Oment posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 6:48am
Massive body count, more gore than in any ten gorefest films combined and a tantalising epilogue slash teaser. All in all, it's the perfect ending to a tornado-esque story in intensity, but with all the longevity of Everlasting Fire. Your penchant for straying away from the classic third-person perspective has made your fanfiction stories all the more interesting to read, and I won't deny that I'll be waiting eagerly for the next installment in this series.
In this chapter, I liked HJ's eulogy and Dumbledore's death the most. No glorious death for him, but a cheap shot and not even at Voldemort's hand. I had thought you would use Snape for it, should the time for Dumbledore's death come (though I didn't envision it coming this soon...), but this fits as good as any. As for the eulogy -- it's just evoking, let's keep it at that.
Good luck in your writing endeavours,
JBern replied:
Well the body count was near what I did in TFtCD. I had originally planned for it to be Snape, but Igor became a better foil after Snape was dismissed.
What can I say, plans change.
Look for Inner Eye chapter 2 in a couple of weeks and thanks for the review.
MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Friday 29th May 2009 6:23am
I really enjoyed reading this story, cant wait for the sequel.
Thanks For writing
MPF
JBern replied:
Thanks MPF. Always nice to get reviews from you.
MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Saturday 30th May 2009 1:26am
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