Zicou posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 4:49pm

That was great, awesome!!!
It could be funny to see a demonstration between two duelist masters : flitwick and Maxime!!!
Continuuuuuuuuuuuuuue!
Z.

IceBlades posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 4:00pm

A good ending. Though, as with every story I finish, I'm disappointed it had to end. I feel that you might be looking to pick this story back up at a later time.

Great twist using Madame Maxime as a duelist.

I look forward to more of The Inner Eye now that Lie is over.

Happy Writing

vandallas posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 3:03pm

making love FTW

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 2:55pm

Outstanding chapter!!!! I get this feeling that Harry and Fleur's relationship might just stand the test of time, am I right???? Will we be seeing any little Harry's coming from there loving of each other???? Will there be any fall out from Harry telling Fleur about himself???? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please!!!!:):):):)

Jon posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 2:52pm

loved the one-liners... they're fantastic.

i'm guessing the summer stay at the dursleys would be more tricky this time, with piers' death.
it's a great, humorous chapter
looking forward to see Ron-Fleur interaction. should be amusing, but i'm guessing the story is shifting towards the climax, so i'm looking forward to serious story telling next chapter..

MOD posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 2:28pm

Yet another fantastic update! Yahoo :)
Seems to be building up nicely for a grand finale

Alvin Au posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 2:04pm

good chapter!! cant wait till you update again...

btw, is your original novel going to be available for sale in bookstores or online? seeing how well you write fanfics, I will probably be tempted to try your novels... at least i wont have to wait for updates to get to the end of the story!! LOL

take care!!

baumgal2 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 1:57pm

This was great - especially the ending ;)
Seriously though, I like the way you are developing their relationship.

Danny K posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 1:50pm

Jim, the delay was worth it. Excellent chapter. Thank you.

Alex00 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 1:19pm

Great chapter.

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 1:02pm

Wow, something to read here indeed. Fabulous to see Fleur's parents not as the oh so perfect ones of recent fics, but as people, who are trying hard to do their best, and have had good and bad times. It was impressive how you had the date/dinner party go, as well as seeing how HJ and Fleur were able to get some time together, and can't wait to see what happens in the aftermath as the final task approaches.

noylj posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 12:38pm

Great. Too bad there is no "lemon" version. Right now, Fudge, Bumbles, and a few others should be on a "to be killed on sight" list.
It is so nice to even have three paragraphs or so of Harry getting some happiness.

Matthew Sands posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 11:34am

I have to say, I really appreciate how you make Harry work for his victories(magical and otherwise).

Ahmed365 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 11:23am

Epc, epic chapter. Keep up the great work and update quicker! :D

skulLXeon posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 11:13am

Well, this was very good... interesting development with Fleur's family.... And funny conversation during the cleansing ritual.... :) kinda have to agree with the Hat on the whole send them a head, in return thing... :) awesome chapter... see you when you update next... on either this... or TML.... =)

DrT posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 9:15am

Excellent update, with no one idealized

Too bad Harry can't tell Voldemort how much he disliked Piers and feign disinterest at his death

Clell65619 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 8:53am

- Wow.

- The broom ride was hot.

- One dead former Harry Hunter. The Hat is right, Tommy is weak. So the Delacours are frightened, and Fleur doesn't care. Interesting.

- This is just about your best work...

stuart posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 8:45am

Nice chapter, good to see some movement in the relationship while not taking away from the story. You missed a "e" or two on Maxime's name in the begining, other than that it was good. Look forward to your next update. Cheers

Loopy Dane posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 8:44am

Excellent chapter! The romance is developing nicely, and Fleur is turning into a much more sympathetic and interesting character, strong and at the same time "human". The duel with Madame Maxine was fine, though not your best. I suppose that is because it was not "life and death" and your delivery was likely just right to convey that it was a friendly duel. He did not go "all out" as he told Fleur. When the chips are down, your Harry has another level he can reach.
Thank you for sharing your time and talent with us.

whatareyouevensaying posted a comment on Wednesday 15th April 2009 8:29am

I sort of figured not to expect this too soon what with "The Inner Eye" coming out and all.

The opening conversation with Dumbledore was weak, by your standards, meaning it's better than the best I can currently accomplish in writing. It was necessary, though, for Harry's development as a strategist. The rest of the chapter was outstanding, with the Delacours providing just enough hostility to justify the happy ending.

Looking forward to more.

JBern replied:

Thanks.   Sorry about the delay in replying.